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Array ( [sid] => 86081 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~In Memory of You~ [time] => 2005-03-01 05:31:47 [hometext] => I wrote this for my friend Nick that got shot and died at Subway on Valentines Day a few years back. [bodytext] => You died on the day
That was supost to mean Love
Why on this day?
Only he knows from above

As I drove to school that morning
I saw your body being brought out
And nobody really knows
What the shooting was all about

They first assumed drugs
Because of who you were
Then they didn't know
And they were unsure

I always think about
Our time in class
How we used to make fun af Sarah
And just sit there and laugh

I used to Love going to Subway
Now I wont go near
It brings to much sadness
And a untouchable fear

They still don't know who killed you and Steph
I really don't think they care
But if you ever need to talk
Then as always, I will forever be there! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 32 [informant] => wetnwild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

~In Memory of You~

Contributed by wetnwild on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:31:47 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You died on the day
That was supost to mean Love
Why on this day?
Only he knows from above

As I drove to school that morning
I saw your body being brought out
And nobody really knows
What the shooting was all about

They first assumed drugs
Because of who you were
Then they didn't know
And they were unsure

I always think about
Our time in class
How we used to make fun af Sarah
And just sit there and laugh

I used to Love going to Subway
Now I wont go near
It brings to much sadness
And a untouchable fear

They still don't know who killed you and Steph
I really don't think they care
But if you ever need to talk
Then as always, I will forever be there!

Copyright © wetnwild ... [ 2005-03-01 05:31:47]
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Re: ~In Memory of You~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:47:05 AM AEST
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this is so heart breakin sad.
i can't imagene what u really feel about loosing someone so close to u.
I mean I've lost luved ones as both my prents are gone but u really have put every thing into this write wheich is very pwoerfull.
excuse my mistakes as it's touched me so deep.
it reminds me of someone I use to know.
U are so strong for facing your fears and posting this.
god it just rips my heart out of it's palce and makes me feel so humble and broken 'cause I have so much in my life to be thankfull.

when I realize how far down I was un be knowings to me, ofcourse it makes me wonna sing and shout and praise God 4 saving me from death when my heart quit not long ago.
An angel from heaven was in the ambulence that night. Not to mention the angel driver.
I never got the two guys names but still I can never forgot what they did for me that night.

Even tho I don't know the names of the two guys i do know an gel when I see one.
keep writing.
And thanks so much for sharing your heart here.
i'm sure she is smiling on u 4 this.
huggs, tears, and all that good stuff.
this write has moved me in a way I can't explain.
luv,
emy

Re: ~In Memory of You~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:05:44 AM AEST
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A very sad poem in which you expressed your feelings so well. I suspect that it is a very fortunate person that has you for a friend.

Re: ~In Memory of You~ (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 02:53:14 PM AEST
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Although I have not lost anyone in this way, it had a powerful message of the love of a friend left behind. What a better way to put this friendship in the forever.

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