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Array ( [sid] => 86080 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Is For you [time] => 2005-03-01 05:28:46 [hometext] => I wrote this for my ex [bodytext] => This is for you
The one person I thought I could count on

This is for you
The one person who turned thier back and ran

This is for you
The one person that left me standing


Why did you do this
What did I do?

I was true
I stood there right next to you

I was there when everything came down
I was there when you didnt know what to do
I was there doing things for you that you will never know about
I was there...
Where were you?

You were sitting there in the corner

Yelling
Kicking
Screaming

AT ME

You never once stopped
You never let it

It was ME
All me

I did it all
I made your life hell
I created the place you live in
I torment the world you sleep in..

Yeah.....Right..

How does it feel?
To know you were wrong

You put fault where it doesnt belong

I tried
Every single day
I cried
Every other day

How does it feel?

You walk around
Your head held up high

Its okay I know the truth..

Who was real?
It sure wasnt you

Who was real?
I bet it was me

The tears I cried
The blood I sweat

If you could have only seen..

Now I walk along
This road
Twisted
Cracked
Broken
Torn
Its okay
One day I'll be reborn
And you'll see
You'll see
You'll see
I was right all along..
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This Is For you

Contributed by TikiGodAK on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:28:46 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



This is for you
The one person I thought I could count on

This is for you
The one person who turned thier back and ran

This is for you
The one person that left me standing


Why did you do this
What did I do?

I was true
I stood there right next to you

I was there when everything came down
I was there when you didnt know what to do
I was there doing things for you that you will never know about
I was there...
Where were you?

You were sitting there in the corner

Yelling
Kicking
Screaming

AT ME

You never once stopped
You never let it

It was ME
All me

I did it all
I made your life hell
I created the place you live in
I torment the world you sleep in..

Yeah.....Right..

How does it feel?
To know you were wrong

You put fault where it doesnt belong

I tried
Every single day
I cried
Every other day

How does it feel?

You walk around
Your head held up high

Its okay I know the truth..

Who was real?
It sure wasnt you

Who was real?
I bet it was me

The tears I cried
The blood I sweat

If you could have only seen..

Now I walk along
This road
Twisted
Cracked
Broken
Torn
Its okay
One day I'll be reborn
And you'll see
You'll see
You'll see
I was right all along..




Copyright © TikiGodAK ... [ 2005-03-01 05:28:46]
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Re: This Is For you (User Rating: 1 )
by wetnwild on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:38:59 AM AEST
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When the one you Love tears your soal to shreds, then rips out your heart and stomps on it and blames it all on you, theres not much you can do to make that other person realize what they've done. You have a great way of expressing your feelings towards them, and believe me, one day they will see! Great write!


Re: This Is For you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:35:30 AM AEST
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sorry she's your ex but there's two sides to every story and I'd luv to hear her story sometimes.
Every body **** up but life goes on ya know.
maybe she didn't know who was tryin to make a fool of her but bet cha adolla she knows know.
Very good ventin, i'd say.
Stay strong with your new luv honey and try 2 fo get the past as she is probably jus a happy as u r that ya found true luv at last.
huggs, happy day-n-nites,
emy


Re: This Is For you (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:04:23 AM AEST
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moved beyond words.....makes u want to scream out loud dosent it?....


Re: This Is For you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:06:24 PM AEST
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thats a brilliant poem. you were able to show ur emotion through it and show everyone exacty how you felt.
well done. its breath takin to read something like that as the truth and the issue really shines through. well done


Re: This Is For you (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:34:35 AM AEST
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I'm speachless, what a great poem!




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