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Array ( [sid] => 86069 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As the Wind Sweeps Through [time] => 2005-03-01 04:18:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Elegance and relevance burst before my vision
Im stunned and unbelieving, her motions glow and glisten
Her mouth it moves with beauty but Im too distraught to listen
Ive discovered myself powerless, the wind is natures lifting

Brunette and blond, yet long and gone, and still I see no truth
Her shadow even forms something no human could undo
Her smile cracks and so do I but different is the mood
Ive discovered myself powerless, the wind is sweeping through

And as the clock continues round she soon turns to my face
This is the first time we have met, lets not put it to waste
But paralyzed and nervous, will i prove myself her taste?
Ive discovered myself powerless, the wind my only grace

Her hair it flows so freely as it blows between our eyes
Her hand it moves so slowly as her ear becomes the rise
Nightmares turn to hope as a giggle removes the cries
Ive discovered myself powerless, the wind credits my sighs [comments] => 3 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 14 [informant] => b_rand [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

As the Wind Sweeps Through

Contributed by b_rand on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:18:22 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Elegance and relevance burst before my vision
Im stunned and unbelieving, her motions glow and glisten
Her mouth it moves with beauty but Im too distraught to listen
Ive discovered myself powerless, the wind is natures lifting

Brunette and blond, yet long and gone, and still I see no truth
Her shadow even forms something no human could undo
Her smile cracks and so do I but different is the mood
Ive discovered myself powerless, the wind is sweeping through

And as the clock continues round she soon turns to my face
This is the first time we have met, lets not put it to waste
But paralyzed and nervous, will i prove myself her taste?
Ive discovered myself powerless, the wind my only grace

Her hair it flows so freely as it blows between our eyes
Her hand it moves so slowly as her ear becomes the rise
Nightmares turn to hope as a giggle removes the cries
Ive discovered myself powerless, the wind credits my sighs

Copyright © b_rand ... [ 2005-03-01 04:18:22]
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Re: As the Wind Sweeps Through (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:23:41 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking.
huggs,
emy

Re: As the Wind Sweeps Through (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:52:24 AM AEST
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THAT IS BEAUTIFUL and i cant exactly describe how i feel cuase its kinda wierd how it mkes me feel i LOVE it ...keep p the awesome work

Re: As the Wind Sweeps Through (User Rating: 1 )
by Anne-ish on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:45:07 PM AEST
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What a beauty-full poem. So eloquent - I love the repetition and I love the wind!

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