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~WARRIOR~

SultryRose's Signatures

She got caught up in
illisions working too hard.
Didn't eat right, her head,
her house, her body a
big mess. Would she
get thru this test?

Somehow she knew
her angel had watched
over her in the night.
he'd saved her so
many times
even tho she
wasn't aware.

She couldn't hold
on any more.
She knew he'd
been there.

No one beleived in her
but him. he'd hid
in the shadows to
protect her miserable life.
so much pain
he endured for
her strife.

He knew her heart
was dead gone on
somewhere
she couldn't
find.
some one some where
drove her out of
her mind.

He didn't give in
he never gave up
on this scarred
little innocent mind.
Her gave her his
heart so very true
but stayed till her's
she'd find.

[comments] => 8 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 34 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

SHE KNEW HER ANGEL

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:02:59 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

~WARRIOR~

SultryRose's Signatures

She got caught up in
illisions working too hard.
Didn't eat right, her head,
her house, her body a
big mess. Would she
get thru this test?

Somehow she knew
her angel had watched
over her in the night.
he'd saved her so
many times
even tho she
wasn't aware.

She couldn't hold
on any more.
She knew he'd
been there.

No one beleived in her
but him. he'd hid
in the shadows to
protect her miserable life.
so much pain
he endured for
her strife.

He knew her heart
was dead gone on
somewhere
she couldn't
find.
some one some where
drove her out of
her mind.

He didn't give in
he never gave up
on this scarred
little innocent mind.
Her gave her his
heart so very true
but stayed till her's
she'd find.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-03-01 04:02:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: SHE KNEW HER ANGEL (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:06:13 AM AEST
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wow awsome.

Re: SHE KNEW HER ANGEL (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:58:32 AM AEST
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Angel heart..very nicely told..hugs and love:-)venkat

Re: SHE KNEW HER ANGEL (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:33:32 AM AEST
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Hiya Emy ~ I read many of the song lyrics ... I tend to write in that style alot so I guess I try to support it ... I've read many from you ... this one evoked more feeling from me than many I have read lately ... I really like this. You always have such a fabulous layout with pictures and sound ... this is no exception, but to me it is exceptional. The words don't feel forced or slanged ... they have an honest feel to them. I like that more. Thanks for sharing this one ...

Nazmythian ~

Re: SHE KNEW HER ANGEL (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 12:52:15 PM AEST
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This is beautiful Emy.
Really beautiful.
I sometimes think we all have our angels. I am pretty sure I have, too.

Stunning write, my friend.

*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: SHE KNEW HER ANGEL (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:13:39 PM AEST
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Sheerly divine dear Emy.
This is a beautiful write my dear friend.
Great piece of work

Re: SHE KNEW HER ANGEL (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 12:35:44 AM AEST
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Another of your beautifully put words- If I have an angel I feel sorry for them and all the places I have taken them...
Great work

Re: SHE KNEW HER ANGEL (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:34:12 PM AEST
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I really love this too! This is beautiful and gives hope. Awesome.

Scott

Re: SHE KNEW HER ANGEL (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:56:08 PM AEST
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The music came on and I literally jumped at least three feet into the air. I had forgotten my speakers were on!

Now about our poem. It is comforting to believe in your heart that there are angel's amongst us or maybe that angel's take our hand and bring us peace when it is our time.

This really touched me in numerous ways.

I thought it was very deep and very moving.

Kie

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