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Array ( [sid] => 86067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Struggle [time] => 2005-03-01 03:59:26 [hometext] => This poem is written for a good friend of mine who recently is going through a hard time [bodytext] => My life hasn't been easy
not a quit walk down the lane
There were times i thought
I just couldnt't take it no more
when I wanted
to lay down my head and die

I've had friends
good and bad
I was lied to and deceived
There were times
I thought nobody cared
but that where just
my bad friends

They tried to lure me
into there darkness
they were scared
for me to live
to live a happy live
a live in the light

But I survived
because I fought
I fought and struggled
and spit life right back in it's face
Pushed back the darkness
in my mind

Found who my my friends where
found out who cared
I found the good things
all around me
and now
a happy spirit follows me
in my hearth
whereever I go

No more tears
no more sadness
because I learned to trust
the people who really cared
so now there is
a smile on my face

Nobody ever told me
live would be easy
but I did learn
live can be beautifull
if you trust
the people who really care [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 21 [informant] => dormen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Struggle

Contributed by dormen on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:59:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



My life hasn't been easy
not a quit walk down the lane
There were times i thought
I just couldnt't take it no more
when I wanted
to lay down my head and die

I've had friends
good and bad
I was lied to and deceived
There were times
I thought nobody cared
but that where just
my bad friends

They tried to lure me
into there darkness
they were scared
for me to live
to live a happy live
a live in the light

But I survived
because I fought
I fought and struggled
and spit life right back in it's face
Pushed back the darkness
in my mind

Found who my my friends where
found out who cared
I found the good things
all around me
and now
a happy spirit follows me
in my hearth
whereever I go

No more tears
no more sadness
because I learned to trust
the people who really cared
so now there is
a smile on my face

Nobody ever told me
live would be easy
but I did learn
live can be beautifull
if you trust
the people who really care




Copyright © dormen ... [ 2005-03-01 03:59:26]
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Re: Struggle (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:06:39 AM AEST
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Yeah, I can certainly relate in a big way.
a masterpeice.
huggs,
emy


Re: Struggle (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:30:17 PM AEST
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it's like walking down the sidewalk reciting all these things you feel, effortless and true, captivated in your own circle of life. really nice write. Tiffany J.




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