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Array ( [sid] => 86059 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One of Those Days [time] => 2005-03-01 02:46:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When you wake up in the morning and the time seems wrong.
Then the world seems quiet and the mood is calm.
But nothing is happening and barredome sets in.
Its one of those days where efforts seem thin.

When you feal your alone and theres nothing to do.
Then you concentrate and something thats diffrent for you.
But your mind seems frozen and your body seems weak.
Its one of those days where the present looks bleak.

When you try hardest to make something change.
Then your result are just out of range.
But your efforts were worth the try.
Its one of those days where the world seems to cry. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 63 [informant] => youthoughtyouknew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )
One of Those Days

Contributed by youthoughtyouknew on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 02:46:09 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday



When you wake up in the morning and the time seems wrong.
Then the world seems quiet and the mood is calm.
But nothing is happening and barredome sets in.
Its one of those days where efforts seem thin.

When you feal your alone and theres nothing to do.
Then you concentrate and something thats diffrent for you.
But your mind seems frozen and your body seems weak.
Its one of those days where the present looks bleak.

When you try hardest to make something change.
Then your result are just out of range.
But your efforts were worth the try.
Its one of those days where the world seems to cry.




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Re: One of Those Days (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:33:57 AM AEST
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I can certainly relate to this one.
but life goes and suddenly an angel comes along and then breathes the breathe of life into the broken body that u thought was all alone. it strikes a spark that ya thought u knew some where then life makes sense and life is worth the trying again.
Thanks for posting this as it's an awesomely inspiring write.
huggs,
emy




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