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Array ( [sid] => 86057 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgive Me [time] => 2005-03-01 01:40:55 [hometext] => for Tiffany and Jessica, the two most amazing women in the world [bodytext] => I may never find the words that will
patch the hole in Trust
but I'll spend the rest of my life trying.
How could I have been so foolish?
To think I was ready to move on
when I could not leave the past
so instead You become the
"What was"
which was never to be
in the first place.
I just missed the endless nights
of card games and smoke,
cigarettes and drink
and the laughter that pulsated within the walls.
Even the lonely nights
knowing you cared
making sure I made it through
a door between us
never really letting you close enough
for I felt the need to run
that desperate call I answer
without fail.
Fail,
thats what I did to you
as a Friend and Brother.
But the past is past
and I can not deny what I have done
as each day I rise to the sun in my room
I am reminded of how I did you
wrong. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 50 [informant] => Nardo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

Forgive Me

Contributed by Nardo on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:40:55 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

I may never find the words that will
patch the hole in Trust
but I'll spend the rest of my life trying.
How could I have been so foolish?
To think I was ready to move on
when I could not leave the past
so instead You become the
"What was"
which was never to be
in the first place.
I just missed the endless nights
of card games and smoke,
cigarettes and drink
and the laughter that pulsated within the walls.
Even the lonely nights
knowing you cared
making sure I made it through
a door between us
never really letting you close enough
for I felt the need to run
that desperate call I answer
without fail.
Fail,
thats what I did to you
as a Friend and Brother.
But the past is past
and I can not deny what I have done
as each day I rise to the sun in my room
I am reminded of how I did you
wrong.

Copyright © Nardo ... [ 2005-03-01 01:40:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:48:09 AM AEST
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to be frogiven we must forgive ourselfs but with a beautifull write like this who could not?
great writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:30:35 PM AEST
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A very nicely written piece of work.
I also totally agree with Emy on this one.
cheers

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