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Array ( [sid] => 8605 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Leave [time] => 2002-12-15 01:00:00 [hometext] => This poem probaley doesn't make sense to anyone but me... [bodytext] => Wow...suprise
You did it again
You lied
and managed to get back in
Why can't you just go
You're useless to me
You're never goin to change
Its obviouse
So can't you just leave
Lets get it over with
Lets get our lives off pause
Because for last few months I haven't been living
I have been watching this nightmare go on
But, i couldn't move
I couldn't control my actions or the things i said
This can't be good for either of us
Just go
Go on
Please..
It will make life so much easier
No..no..i don't want to hear about change
Because i believe the word "change" to you doesn't have a meaning
you can't mess with my emotions anymore
Didn't you get the clue that i don't need you when we quit talking
Didn't you think before you said the things you said?
Guess not
So leave
Just leave [comments] => 3 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Crazy4Christ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

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Contributed by Crazy4Christ on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Wow...suprise
You did it again
You lied
and managed to get back in
Why can't you just go
You're useless to me
You're never goin to change
Its obviouse
So can't you just leave
Lets get it over with
Lets get our lives off pause
Because for last few months I haven't been living
I have been watching this nightmare go on
But, i couldn't move
I couldn't control my actions or the things i said
This can't be good for either of us
Just go
Go on
Please..
It will make life so much easier
No..no..i don't want to hear about change
Because i believe the word "change" to you doesn't have a meaning
you can't mess with my emotions anymore
Didn't you get the clue that i don't need you when we quit talking
Didn't you think before you said the things you said?
Guess not
So leave
Just leave

Copyright © Crazy4Christ ... [ 2002-12-15 01:00:00]
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Re: Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:51:20 AM AEST
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Well this is sad...and it's sad when one's lied to, and i've been here before, but i think that forgiveness is the key word here...i forgave the person who lied to me, and let them move on....as he let me move on..i think when things end on a good note like that, that things for both people are much better......but bitterness only eats you up inside if you allow it to sit and fester...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot, it brought back some good and not so good memories for me...

.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 08:31:21 PM AEST
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this is sad, heart wrenching...but there is a new power found in this. Nice write.

Re: Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by spaceotter on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:13:29 AM AEST
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wow this hit home. I had similar problems in the past. Probably the poem that has most affected me emotionally on this site. Nice write.

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