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Array ( [sid] => 86047 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Closet Case [time] => 2005-02-28 23:01:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Door swings open.
Body hung in.
Just another victim,
Too add to his sin.

Blood spread arcoss.
Death at it's peak.
Sillouette of nothingness.
As another body grows weak.

Mirroring the past,
As another life fades away.
Drug and slung all around,
Throughout the night, into the day.

Murder mystery from the start.
"Closet Case" as it was named.
Found all the bodies hung up to dry.
Sickening smell with no one to blame.

One lead to go from.
Selected subjects,
With pictures, places and times.
Hunted them down...it all reflects.
Back, but still is just faint signs

Another man found in a closet,
Hung from his back.
Blood dripping down,
Because of the sharp hanger rack.
...~...
Staring into the mirror,
I grab my coat.
Another case tonight,
Another closet hanging without a rope.

Peering into my victims face
I grab the hooks to put in place
Picking him up, to add to the clothes rack
I know where he'll be....I'll be a star
I killed all the rest...and it was'nt hard
...
I'll be back
To save his life...
I'm the investigator...
I did'nt do it out of anger...
I did it because I'm a cheater...
Never a case I could solve...
No ones life I could ever save...
I'll finally make a change...
You might call me deranged
Or a quack, sycopath, lunatic
Somewhere along those lines
But I'm a failure, and it's always made me SICK!
...
I'm gonna be a HERO,
For saving this ZERO.
Faking the case I'll solve,
Right before his life desolves
I pull him down...
Removing the hooks
Setting him on the ground,
I'll call back up,
Telling them what I have found
...
So I now ask you,
How do you feel about my story?
It's only something anyone would do
When there life is'nt all HUNKY-DORRY!
At least I cleaned out my closet.
Just remember
...
It's you, with it ALL,
That forced me to do it! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 59 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
Closet Case

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



Door swings open.
Body hung in.
Just another victim,
Too add to his sin.

Blood spread arcoss.
Death at it's peak.
Sillouette of nothingness.
As another body grows weak.

Mirroring the past,
As another life fades away.
Drug and slung all around,
Throughout the night, into the day.

Murder mystery from the start.
"Closet Case" as it was named.
Found all the bodies hung up to dry.
Sickening smell with no one to blame.

One lead to go from.
Selected subjects,
With pictures, places and times.
Hunted them down...it all reflects.
Back, but still is just faint signs

Another man found in a closet,
Hung from his back.
Blood dripping down,
Because of the sharp hanger rack.
...~...
Staring into the mirror,
I grab my coat.
Another case tonight,
Another closet hanging without a rope.

Peering into my victims face
I grab the hooks to put in place
Picking him up, to add to the clothes rack
I know where he'll be....I'll be a star
I killed all the rest...and it was'nt hard
...
I'll be back
To save his life...
I'm the investigator...
I did'nt do it out of anger...
I did it because I'm a cheater...
Never a case I could solve...
No ones life I could ever save...
I'll finally make a change...
You might call me deranged
Or a quack, sycopath, lunatic
Somewhere along those lines
But I'm a failure, and it's always made me SICK!
...
I'm gonna be a HERO,
For saving this ZERO.
Faking the case I'll solve,
Right before his life desolves
I pull him down...
Removing the hooks
Setting him on the ground,
I'll call back up,
Telling them what I have found
...
So I now ask you,
How do you feel about my story?
It's only something anyone would do
When there life is'nt all HUNKY-DORRY!
At least I cleaned out my closet.
Just remember
...
It's you, with it ALL,
That forced me to do it!




Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-28 23:01:43]
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Re: Closet Case (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:12:18 PM AEST
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woot. amazing poem clark. i have psychopathic tendencies and i could almost really identify with this one. except i wouldnt save the zero. =]


Re: Closet Case (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:13:00 PM AEST
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OK,I'll call you deranged,i liked what you wrote, it was interesting, you have a very good imagination.
sojourner,


Re: Closet Case (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 02:06:59 AM AEST
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we all kill ourselves every day in one way or the other. Kindda like Paul, (I think) in the bible that said, "I die dailey.
I don't like the gore but I get the idea I think? scratching my head."
huggs,
emy




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