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Tyler
Contributed by
jjones12
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Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:39:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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your alway's there for me,
when i'm around you i'm what i want to be,
i am the happy me,
i'm not so down,
and i feel like i'm wearing a crown,
even though we aren't together,
nothing could get any better,
because i am happy and i hope you are to,
even when i have the flew,
i'll still remember you,
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jjones12
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2005-02-28 22:39:31]
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Re: Tyler
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by MLCstar on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:47:21 PM AEST
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| I don't think it is sloppy, I think it is beautiful. I am usually very critical about the poems I read, but this is just so pure and sweet that I am just left with a big smile on my face! I hope your friend appreciates it. when you said "when I have the flew" did you mean "flu"? I was a little confused on that. |
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Re: Tyler
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 02:23:41 AM AEST
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Well for me this one makes me wonna weep as it reminds me of one of my grandsons and my oldest daughter with the flu.
It's really good as it asuress me that no matter what every thing will be all right.
Thanks for sharing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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