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~~~~
How do you describe a love
That’s stronger than any word?
How do you describe a feeling
That ears have never heard?
From the minute the doctor held you up
And I looked upon your face
A wave of love came over me
That time could not erase
For nine months we formed a bond
Though we never looked eye to eye
And now as the time arrived
All we both could do was cry
Yet when I held you in my arms
We both felt such at peace
For together as father and son
We found the missing piece
And as if our love wasn’t big enough
Somehow it daily grew
And when I wanted to see myself
All I had to do was look at you
You’re the greatest love I ever knew
The greatest gift I ever got
All the surprises you had in store for me
Was never less than a lot
It’s my wish to grow along with you
And experience every first
To be the greatest father to you
Is an unquenchable thirst
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Describe A Love

Contributed by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:30:31 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry

Describe A Love
~~~~
How do you describe a love
That’s stronger than any word?
How do you describe a feeling
That ears have never heard?
From the minute the doctor held you up
And I looked upon your face
A wave of love came over me
That time could not erase
For nine months we formed a bond
Though we never looked eye to eye
And now as the time arrived
All we both could do was cry
Yet when I held you in my arms
We both felt such at peace
For together as father and son
We found the missing piece
And as if our love wasn’t big enough
Somehow it daily grew
And when I wanted to see myself
All I had to do was look at you
You’re the greatest love I ever knew
The greatest gift I ever got
All the surprises you had in store for me
Was never less than a lot
It’s my wish to grow along with you
And experience every first
To be the greatest father to you
Is an unquenchable thirst

Copyright Â© Jeff_Scott_Morehead ... [ 2005-02-28 22:30:31]
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Re: Describe A Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:47:54 AM AEST
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Imagine how God must love us...so many times more than we even love our children. This makes me think of that, and I cannot fathom the depth of that emotion.
Stitch

Re: Describe A Love (User Rating: 1 )
by thexshattered on Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 08:50:06 AM AEST
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The moment I read those first few lines, I smiled. It's just so sweet. The way you wrote it was okay... But the emotions were really good. It's one of those poems that's more emotion and sincerity.

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