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1 Sonnet
Contributed by
Gothchyk
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Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:13:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Both of us always looking for the fall
Needing something to replace the rough blades
Wanting a love that's worth risking it all
Both of us knowing love easily fades
Tiny are the silver yet shiny blades
As tears of pain start streaming down our face
Bringing with them unwanted crimson shades
Leaving us broken without loves embrace
Underneath our torn wings we find solace
The tears are many and let in the rain
In the mist our senses seem the dullest
Wishing I could chase away your pain
Both of us hoping that this love will win
I find myself kissing your broken skin
Copyright ©
Gothchyk
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2005-02-28 22:13:35]
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Re: 1 Sonnet
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:19:51 AM AEST
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| very cool |
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Re: 1 Sonnet
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by bernard on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:02:09 AM AEST
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| I like it bernard. |
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Re: 1 Sonnet
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:49:06 AM AEST
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I'm very happy to have seen
a sonnet, and true to form, on this site-
good discipline-
and though sad, it was.. a sonnet, like you said.
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