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Array ( [sid] => 86003 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FOR YOU [time] => 2005-02-28 17:17:55 [hometext] => written for a good freind [bodytext] => for you my love inside
is all that i could want
for you my love i set aside
untill you come for me
for you my love inside
as strong as it could be
for you i would do anything
i write a song and sing
for you my love could never end
for you my wounds would mend
for you all i do
for you can be my world
and everything surrounding
for you my stomach curls
for you i would do anything
for you are you
and thats what counts
for you i am your girl
and you my man
for you i do anything i can [comments] => 2 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 22 [informant] => rockstarr12747 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

FOR YOU

Contributed by rockstarr12747 on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:17:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

for you my love inside
is all that i could want
for you my love i set aside
untill you come for me
for you my love inside
as strong as it could be
for you i would do anything
i write a song and sing
for you my love could never end
for you my wounds would mend
for you all i do
for you can be my world
and everything surrounding
for you my stomach curls
for you i would do anything
for you are you
and thats what counts
for you i am your girl
and you my man
for you i do anything i can

Copyright © rockstarr12747 ... [ 2005-02-28 17:17:55]
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Re: FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:29:08 PM AEST
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very well written poem, the theme of doing anything for this person is very clear.
my favourite lines were:
"for you i would do anything
for you are you
and thats what counts
for you i am your girl
and you my man
for you i do anything i can.
these lines really sum up the whole poem and they flow especially well.
good work

Re: FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:29:21 PM AEST
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Well Crystal ... welcome to YPDC. That is a good start, a very nice first post. Every one has a different style and a different preferred method of writing here ... I hope you enjoy your stay and that you find yourself a welcome member of the family.

Nazmythian ~

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