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Array ( [sid] => 85992 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => God Walks With Me [time] => 2005-02-28 15:29:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When the days have no end
When no face resembles a friend
When no one will let me be
God walks with me

When my heart is filled with doubt
When Heaven's tears have all dried out
When I am drowning in the seas
God walks with me

When temptation is all I can feel
When the flames reach up to lick my heels
When I'm overwhelmed by greed
God walks with me

And when hope finally floats my way
When happiness decides it's here to stay
When I'm surrounded by my every dream
God will walk with me

Because He takes my hand
And He sets me free
And no matter the road

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God Walks With Me

Contributed by stellar on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 03:29:44 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

When the days have no end
When no face resembles a friend
When no one will let me be
God walks with me

When my heart is filled with doubt
When Heaven's tears have all dried out
When I am drowning in the seas
God walks with me

When temptation is all I can feel
When the flames reach up to lick my heels
When I'm overwhelmed by greed
God walks with me

And when hope finally floats my way
When happiness decides it's here to stay
When I'm surrounded by my every dream
God will walk with me

Because He takes my hand
And He sets me free
And no matter the road

God will always walk with me

Copyright © stellar ... [ 2005-02-28 15:29:44]
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Re: God Walks With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 06:54:36 PM AEST
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What a wonderful reminder. I once wrote something called Longing to walk with You.
It's something I feel more strongly every day.
You describe it with finesse and beauty.
Stitch

Re: God Walks With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by kkoala1957 on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 08:04:38 PM AEST
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Hi stellar...I like this it is a great write. Thanks for sharing your creativity.

kkoala (Alan)

Re: God Walks With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:33:46 PM AEST
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I love this. It's lovely. The use of he repeated line is great too, it isn't annoying, it is just right.
Great work, you describe how you feel brilliantly.

*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: God Walks With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 01:35:02 AM AEST
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*****When Heaven's tears have all dried out
When I am drowning in the seas

I love these lines. Especially the symbols.. tears and seas. Very nice metaphor.. analogy. They are alike, both salty.

*****Because He takes my hand
And He sets me free
And no matter the road

God will always walk with me

You speak truths. I love your write.. It is a wonderful and filled with His Passion.

Thank you for this most beautiful creation on a walk with God

Raquel Leah :D

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