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Array ( [sid] => 85979 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => underneath it all [time] => 2005-02-28 12:23:14 [hometext] => Its wrote as if I wud be talking to my boyfriend but its just a flow of my emotions due to missing him, my biological father and listening to the song Emotionless by Good Charlotte.....comments really appreciated.... [bodytext] =>



Words pour from me,
Yet I have nothing for you to see.
I feel like my life is a play,
Where you can throw me into dismay,
Or make me feel joy.
How does it feel to control me like a toy?
You do not realize the power you hold,
I think this should stay untold.

You have the power to bring a smile to my face,
Is it possible you might put tears in its place?
You make me feel great happiness,
Could you possibly make me feel immense sadness?
Will you be the one to wipe away my tears,
Hold me tight and safe from my fears.
You said you want to look after me,
Do you realize my scars run so deeply?

I used to cut myself for expression,
When I had no way of confession.
How would you react if I did that at the moment?
Would you still look at me without judgement?
Would you understand or would you just shout?
Or would you do the worst and walk out?
All I would need is love and a hug,
Because you are my natural drug.



SJ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 466 [topic] => 21 [informant] => little_genna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
underneath it all

Contributed by little_genna on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 12:23:14 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems







Words pour from me,
Yet I have nothing for you to see.
I feel like my life is a play,
Where you can throw me into dismay,
Or make me feel joy.
How does it feel to control me like a toy?
You do not realize the power you hold,
I think this should stay untold.

You have the power to bring a smile to my face,
Is it possible you might put tears in its place?
You make me feel great happiness,
Could you possibly make me feel immense sadness?
Will you be the one to wipe away my tears,
Hold me tight and safe from my fears.
You said you want to look after me,
Do you realize my scars run so deeply?

I used to cut myself for expression,
When I had no way of confession.
How would you react if I did that at the moment?
Would you still look at me without judgement?
Would you understand or would you just shout?
Or would you do the worst and walk out?
All I would need is love and a hug,
Because you are my natural drug.



SJ




Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2005-02-28 12:23:14]
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Re: underneath it all (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:20:40 PM AEST
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this is a work of art "cause u r my natural drug " wow, u got that right, beautiful peice of
writting about a most hurting subject . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: underneath it all (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:01:41 AM AEST
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tis a masterpiece...its so wonderful to see...how uve expressed the various experiences in your life.....it shows how much uve grown.....love u always..


Re: underneath it all (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:28:31 PM AEST
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girl this one rocks and really says what kindda person u r with your big heart.
I'm happy to hear that the cutting is a thing of the past. You've really grown in your writing and your inner self.
i'm so proud of u. this makes me so happy.
Luv, huggs, big smiles-n-very proud.
emy




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