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Array ( [sid] => 85947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cycle of Energy [time] => 2005-02-27 21:57:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => From the broken muses
Slips typical abuses
Every highschool outcast feels it
But im am adult and havnt healed yet.
In ignorance of timeing
I keep it close to finding
Inside of that little blade is a blinking neon sign
"Help me out of this because i dont want to be alive."
Out of spiteful charector
I rake through distasteful manor
My weakness creates a messy extacy
A seperate incision for almost everything.
I plea for strength and knowledge
Though i found nothing is above us
Alone, you and i are still only human
I cut to feel what you feel, but look stupid.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 72 [informant] => LevyMetal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Cycle of Energy

Contributed by LevyMetal on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 09:57:03 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

From the broken muses
Slips typical abuses
Every highschool outcast feels it
But im am adult and havnt healed yet.
In ignorance of timeing
I keep it close to finding
Inside of that little blade is a blinking neon sign
"Help me out of this because i dont want to be alive."
Out of spiteful charector
I rake through distasteful manor
My weakness creates a messy extacy
A seperate incision for almost everything.
I plea for strength and knowledge
Though i found nothing is above us
Alone, you and i are still only human
I cut to feel what you feel, but look stupid.

Copyright © LevyMetal ... [ 2005-02-27 21:57:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cycle of Energy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:12:44 PM AEST
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so very sad but great wrting.
huggs,
emy

Re: Cycle of Energy (User Rating: 1 )
by prozac_memory on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 09:01:09 AM AEST
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=( a sad but well written poem. keep up the good writing...
[x].

Re: Cycle of Energy (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:17:59 PM AEST
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thats a great poem.

Re: Cycle of Energy (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetdemoness on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 06:28:17 PM AEST
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Well the ryming is really good. I understand what you feel...but i don't cut myself anymore...when i feel an overflow of saddness i yearn for the blade.

Re: Cycle of Energy (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:09:19 PM AEST
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sad but i guess its real if its how u feel
kc

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