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One Hour

Contributed by sinned on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 02:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy



Only an hour to go
Gosh work time goes so slow
Night time a date a prettry lass
Drinks and music time so fast
Hours on end time with friends
Ahem !
In the garden the fell asleep
God man prayed and weeped
Breathern just a while Couldn't awaken for even an hour
He prayed and sweat blood
God if only I could
Modern man is prettry much the same
I love you Jesus,but whats in a name
I am good I do little wrong and I behave
When time comes I want to be saved
Keep the Sabbath Holy
Stay with me for one hour only
In the garden He suffered our sin
Praying praying for all of man
Just an hour did He ask
We busy ourselves with unneeded task
Seek and you shall find
If only,if only we take the time
It is instilled within there is a higher Being
True faith is faith without seeing,but believng
The world beautiful can seem dreary and dark
This be the time many see a spark
Lord I need You I need You Now
Work on Sunday can be idol toil
Pray with Me for just an hour
Lord help me see
Lead me,lead me
Sinned





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Re: One Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:03:18 PM AEST
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I'm not a religious man but i still liked this poem... it was really good.... shows your commitment to your faith


Re: One Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:00:59 PM AEST
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Our humanity doesn't change, does it? We are all cut from the same cloth...the one with the sinful nature woven in. It is the reason ONLY Christ could save us. I love your writes because they encourage my faith and make me think.
Stitch


Re: One Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:19:47 PM AEST
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this one needs stanzas. interesting piece and verses.


Re: One Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:41:55 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
huggs,
emy


Re: One Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 09:28:08 AM AEST
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very good

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