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Array ( [sid] => 85887 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Knife Within Me [time] => 2005-02-27 10:15:10 [hometext] => its tearing .. its scarring .. its killing [bodytext] => Knife Within Me

It scars me sometimes
The knife that lives inside my soul
I feel it moving inside my veins
Making my heart a black hole

I don't know where it came from
Or why is it inside of me
Once happy and joyful
Now pain is what I see

It cuts me deep
So much I bleed
Im drowning in my own blood
And I'm praying the end to hurry

But the final darkness never comes
Once I am weak beyond knowing
It leaves me to regain my strenght
then it slowing starts coming

I scream at myself
I scream at the world
the knife is hurting
My vision is swirled

Devil voices i hear
Tearing me apart
He is twisting my knife
Making my crimson paint art

I am not that strong
I'm about to cave in
I'll give in to myself
And that would be the end

But still i'll be trapped
In the darkness of my mind
My own thoughts knowing
Of what i left behind

Darkness flowing forever around me
Skin is falling apart
Letting the blood breathe
Then my life shatters, first with my heart. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Xxluckie_lynnxX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Knife Within Me

Contributed by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:15:10 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Knife Within Me

It scars me sometimes
The knife that lives inside my soul
I feel it moving inside my veins
Making my heart a black hole

I don't know where it came from
Or why is it inside of me
Once happy and joyful
Now pain is what I see

It cuts me deep
So much I bleed
Im drowning in my own blood
And I'm praying the end to hurry

But the final darkness never comes
Once I am weak beyond knowing
It leaves me to regain my strenght
then it slowing starts coming

I scream at myself
I scream at the world
the knife is hurting
My vision is swirled

Devil voices i hear
Tearing me apart
He is twisting my knife
Making my crimson paint art

I am not that strong
I'm about to cave in
I'll give in to myself
And that would be the end

But still i'll be trapped
In the darkness of my mind
My own thoughts knowing
Of what i left behind

Darkness flowing forever around me
Skin is falling apart
Letting the blood breathe
Then my life shatters, first with my heart.




Copyright © Xxluckie_lynnxX ... [ 2005-02-27 10:15:10]
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Re: Knife Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:21:45 AM AEST
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a pained, emotional and dark write, well expressed
pix xx


Re: Knife Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 12:17:20 PM AEST
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Scarey, painful, emotional and a very good write.


Re: Knife Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:06:28 PM AEST
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one of the better poems ive read today.


Re: Knife Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by XOashleyreneXO on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:53:48 PM AEST
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love it. people REALLY do stab a PAINFUL "knife" throught your HEART!!!

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