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Your resentment running deep within you.
I can see your spiteful words form,
As you get ready to express your abhorrence.
Every bit of you reflects your spite,
I am an anathema to you.
I watch as you deride my attempts to be civil,
Detesting my façade of not caring.
But you are unrelenting and despising,
And your repugnance tears me to peices.
They all think that I have similar animosity,
That I hold you as an antagonist.
Even I thought you an enemy,
Though I'm shattered by your hostility.
Our oppositions are expected,
And our aversion is quite necessary.
Neither you nor I could cease to show our eschewal,
Though our enmity is faked.
But looking in your seemingly malevolent eyes,
Sometimes makes me forget the truth.
They may have forced our hatred,
But they cannot control our love.
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Hidden and Forbidden

Contributed by Jane_Doe on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 02:57:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You look at me with distain,
Your resentment running deep within you.
I can see your spiteful words form,
As you get ready to express your abhorrence.
Every bit of you reflects your spite,
I am an anathema to you.
I watch as you deride my attempts to be civil,
Detesting my façade of not caring.
But you are unrelenting and despising,
And your repugnance tears me to peices.
They all think that I have similar animosity,
That I hold you as an antagonist.
Even I thought you an enemy,
Though I'm shattered by your hostility.
Our oppositions are expected,
And our aversion is quite necessary.
Neither you nor I could cease to show our eschewal,
Though our enmity is faked.
But looking in your seemingly malevolent eyes,
Sometimes makes me forget the truth.
They may have forced our hatred,
But they cannot control our love.

Copyright Â© Jane_Doe ... [ 2005-02-27 02:57:53]
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Re: Hidden and Forbidden (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:34:43 AM AEST
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This sounds like a does he love me does he not. Good poem with flow I like it bernard.

Re: Hidden and Forbidden (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:55:21 AM AEST
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A powerful write, in which, you have expressed through your choice of wording...
You must be a person of extremes??
As it is observed by your use of contrariety...between love and hate.
An interesting muse.

Re: Hidden and Forbidden (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:48:20 AM AEST
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Another well expressed write.

Re: Hidden and Forbidden (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 08:01:50 AM AEST
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a very strong and well expressed write,
pix xx

Re: Hidden and Forbidden (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:47:33 AM AEST
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well written hidden and forbidden love keep writing ~chrissy

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