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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Real?
[time] => 2002-12-14 19:00:00
[hometext] => Have a look at this!
In one breath I'm saying that I hold a niggling disbelief in people that's harbouring somewhere in the back of my mind. Then in the next breath I'm almost begging people to believe in me??? Ridiculous!! Am I mental or something???
The disappointment in my whole life finally showing itself to be a constant selfish contradiction, is immense at the moment! But I suppose that at least I realise this now, so maybe I can do something about it, before it was all too late.
[bodytext] => Are you really born of reality?
Or maybe you're part of this dream,
Wanting so much to believe in your presence
But your form my eyes haven't seen!
Of waking one morn to the song of your breath
This wish probably won't come true,
Nor the other of holding your hand so tight
Whilst rippling waves our feet splash through!
Unable to explain how you make me feel
For the fear from my life you'd soon vanish,
From my dreams and wishes this image I've formed
Is trying so hard to be banished!
Little pixels lined up side by side
Are of you all my eyes ever see,
For all I know but a lonelier older man
Is possibly what you actually might be!
If sceptical of life is how my words sound
The reason for this is because,
For honesty people in my physical life
Just could not give a to$$!
If any lady had held a strong feeling for me
I wish she would've just said,
For then the fear I hold of a lonely life
Could finally have been tucked into bed!
The feelings I have are for all to see
Expressed here within my words,
I can see no reason to be dishonest
With finding happiness this never works!
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Real?
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Unaekseveer1
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Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Are you really born of reality?
Or maybe you're part of this dream,
Wanting so much to believe in your presence
But your form my eyes haven't seen!
Of waking one morn to the song of your breath
This wish probably won't come true,
Nor the other of holding your hand so tight
Whilst rippling waves our feet splash through!
Unable to explain how you make me feel
For the fear from my life you'd soon vanish,
From my dreams and wishes this image I've formed
Is trying so hard to be banished!
Little pixels lined up side by side
Are of you all my eyes ever see,
For all I know but a lonelier older man
Is possibly what you actually might be!
If sceptical of life is how my words sound
The reason for this is because,
For honesty people in my physical life
Just could not give a to$$!
If any lady had held a strong feeling for me
I wish she would've just said,
For then the fear I hold of a lonely life
Could finally have been tucked into bed!
The feelings I have are for all to see
Expressed here within my words,
I can see no reason to be dishonest
With finding happiness this never works!
Copyright ©
Unaekseveer1
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2002-12-14 19:00:00]
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Re: Real?
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by Nessiecat on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 07:20:01 PM AEST
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Tell you what mate, you're doing just the same as I di. You're questioning your thoughts and feelings. I think that's the right way to be, the right way to learn.
You're not mad because if you were you wouldn't ask that question. Keep on keepin' on.
XXX Nessiecat
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Re: Real?
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 10:54:59 PM AEST
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| Every touching. It was very good. I sorta feel like you. Really not sure of how I'm really feeling inside asking those same questions. But soon you'll find the answer your looking for. The heart never lets you down but only shows what you really feel. |
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Re: Real?
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by OreO on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:24:01 AM AEST
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Well now im crying....this touched me in a way nobody could understand....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Real?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 08:46:25 PM AEST
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Dean, This one is really good. I enjoyed reading it.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Real?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:00:13 PM AEST
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Why thankyou Candice,
I am very pleased to hear that you enjoyed reading this. After all this is one of the many reasons why I enjoy writing my stuff.
You know I enjoy very much reading yours also.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Real?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:03:13 PM AEST
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Dean, That is also one of the reason I write. The other is of course to express my feelings for Shadow at least on paper any way. I am glad that you enjoy reading my work.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Real?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:03:20 PM AEST
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It wasn't meant to upset anyone OreO,
In fact I'm one of those who obviously doesn't understand, but I'm pleased you felt touched in some way??lol.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Real?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:11:20 PM AEST
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But only on paper, this is not good enough Candice you really must try harder!!
No only kiddin you on.Hehehe
Can I guess what your Christmas wish is for Candice? And are you going to give it a chance of coming true I ask myself??Hmmm
Sorry, I've been in a not so funny mood this weekend, got stood up by someone I like on Saturday, it was nothing important but I don't like it when this happens without warning!!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Real?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:14:21 PM AEST
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Thankyou for understanding this lilch4ever,
You've managed more than I could. I seem to like confusing myself for some reason??!!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Real?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:19:37 PM AEST
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I keep hoping that I'll learn something from being like this Ness,
But in the end 2+2 in my mind always seems to make something like 27,465.87??
Thankyou for understanding and for saying that you think I'm not mad!!Hehehe
With love
Dan;-) |
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Re: Real?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:19:58 PM AEST
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Dean, I am sure you can guess what my Christmas wish, how could I want anything else? I am going to try to tell him, but I am just so afraid that he will break my heart, I don't think that I could handle that right now. And especially not so close to Christmas. Maybe it should be my New Year's Resolution?
That really does suck to be stood up. I've been there.
ShadowsCloud |
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