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Decimated dreams and feelings
Lost in the grand scheme of things

The words are forgotten
And the pain is forgiven
With the traces of oblivion

I'm throwing it all away
I'm giving it all up to fray
As a no one with no name
And feeling only shame

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What I Love Most

Contributed by essentially9 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:06:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

What I Love Most

Decimated dreams and feelings
Lost in the grand scheme of things

The words are forgotten
And the pain is forgiven
With the traces of oblivion

I'm throwing it all away
I'm giving it all up to fray
As a no one with no name
And feeling only shame

For giving up what I love most in life

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-02-26 22:06:21]
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Re: What I Love Most (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:28:13 PM AEST
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I love the shortness in this poem Jennifer...Im just hoping what your talking about Is'nt Poetry....I really hope your not leaving....Because that is the thought I got from this......

Clark

Re: What I Love Most (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:53:22 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem, although I didn't quite catch what you were giving up, but that must be the point, to have to think for yourself. Remember, you're not a sheep.

Re: What I Love Most (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 06:50:45 AM AEST
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A really simple poem, i just dont know what your giving up (but i have a huntch)

Anyways this was really good Jennifer.

Jane @)----

Re: What I Love Most (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:44:13 AM AEST
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good work
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: What I Love Most (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 12:49:55 PM AEST
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i hope you are not giving it all up, j, without at least talking it over with someone.
short and to the point!
thanks for sharing

Re: What I Love Most (User Rating: 1 )
by Les4567 on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:48:44 PM AEST
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I too hope that what you meant by this poem is poetry. If it is I will be very sad. You are an amazing poet so descriptive you really give your readers a visual. Please dont give up. I liked the poem shorter than usual but other than that I liked it.
~Leslie

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