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what I have become
I don't deserve to be called by my name
Such an awful something of nothing
I have become

I have become an ex-dreamer
not one more great thought
in this head of mine.
It's the awful something of nothing
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An awful something of nothing

Contributed by Sk8ergrl_911 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 03:47:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I don't know anymore
what I have become
I don't deserve to be called by my name
Such an awful something of nothing
I have become

I have become an ex-dreamer
not one more great thought
in this head of mine.
It's the awful something of nothing
that I have become.

Copyright © Sk8ergrl_911 ... [ 2005-02-26 15:47:50]
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Re: An awful something of nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:06:44 PM AEST
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Hmmm... It was short but good. I don't think i quite get your point. Perhaps you could talk to me about it and help me understand it better.

~Alucia~

Re: An awful something of nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 07:03:45 PM AEST
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ah, but tommorow is another day and with the dawn comes another chance...a chance to dream once more, a chance to be what the dreams claim for you!
a certain beautiful songstress said it so succinctly, 'catch your breath and choose your moment'
just needs a little polish and maybe another stanza(to explain why you're so down on yourself - life, losing your muse, or something more sinister).
thanks for sharing

Re: An awful something of nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Sk8ergrl_911 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 07:08:04 PM AEST
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Well see it's supposed to confuse you just a bit, to leave you wondering........no I don't know. I'll explain it i didnt' explain it very well so I'll try to do that later.
Jessica

Re: An awful something of nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 05:23:30 PM AEST
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i liek this poem. it had a little twist in it how it does in fact leave you wondering.
this way i did find it more easy to relate to in such a way that the reader can take your words and put them to a situation of that in their own lives. most poetry explains how you feel to get out your emotions and others are used to inspire, but this poem i find very unique in which it really leaves you wondering and questioning. i liked this a lot and i think the other ppl who posted comments on this should read it again with an open mind, not searching for the true meaning of the poem. i loved this. great job

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