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Array ( [sid] => 85819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Giving Up [time] => 2005-02-26 14:55:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Every memory brings a tear to my eyes
Sometimes its so hard
I just want to die
I cant remeber the last time that
I felt loved..
Who do I turn to now
With no one to trust..?

God I pray..
That You send me an angel
Someone to wipe the tears from my eyes
And God..I pray
That he'll stay for awhile
I need someone to console me
Cause Im givin in so..easily

Why cant I find someone
Who will treat me right
Why cant I find those arms
To hold me through the night
When will I feel safe
And when will I..be protected?
When will I find something real
Instead of somethin fake again..

God I pray
That You send me an angel
Someone to take my pain
And God I pray...
That he wont leave again
I need someone so badly
Someone here to help me
Cause Im givin in so..easily

Lord I know I dont deserve him
And I know there so many more
With such worse problems
But Im beginning to think its all a lie
Lord, I need someone tonight..

God I pray..
That You send me an angel
Im so close to the end..wheres my angel?
Someone to wipe the tears from my eyes
Im so tired of crying..Lord you know I need him..
I need someone to console me
Just a little bit of comfort, please
Cause Im starting to give up..Im givin up..
Lord Im giving up tonight..

Wheres my angel
The one who'll always be there
Wheres my angel
The one who's supposed to care
Wheres that one that I am longed to love
Lord, reach your arms down
And lift me up..
Cause Im giving up.. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Daniels_Princess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Giving Up

Contributed by Daniels_Princess on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:55:24 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Every memory brings a tear to my eyes
Sometimes its so hard
I just want to die
I cant remeber the last time that
I felt loved..
Who do I turn to now
With no one to trust..?

God I pray..
That You send me an angel
Someone to wipe the tears from my eyes
And God..I pray
That he'll stay for awhile
I need someone to console me
Cause Im givin in so..easily

Why cant I find someone
Who will treat me right
Why cant I find those arms
To hold me through the night
When will I feel safe
And when will I..be protected?
When will I find something real
Instead of somethin fake again..

God I pray
That You send me an angel
Someone to take my pain
And God I pray...
That he wont leave again
I need someone so badly
Someone here to help me
Cause Im givin in so..easily

Lord I know I dont deserve him
And I know there so many more
With such worse problems
But Im beginning to think its all a lie
Lord, I need someone tonight..

God I pray..
That You send me an angel
Im so close to the end..wheres my angel?
Someone to wipe the tears from my eyes
Im so tired of crying..Lord you know I need him..
I need someone to console me
Just a little bit of comfort, please
Cause Im starting to give up..Im givin up..
Lord Im giving up tonight..

Wheres my angel
The one who'll always be there
Wheres my angel
The one who's supposed to care
Wheres that one that I am longed to love
Lord, reach your arms down
And lift me up..
Cause Im giving up..




Copyright © Daniels_Princess ... [ 2005-02-26 14:55:24]
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Re: Giving Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystic_Beauty_nz on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:41:32 PM AEST
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It's not fun being alone is it.... Your emotion is felt in your words.. well done.... it's hard to know what we need sometimes... every one gets a turn .. these words could reach a lot of people... Good Luck.... will look out for the song about finding the angel.....when you finish it.... smiles


Re: Giving Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:45:21 PM AEST
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Thank you very much for your words, it was very kind of you..I wrote this awhile back, God sent me my angel..or so I thought..then my angel cheated on me..:'( So now Im left searching for someone to love me again..someone to give whats left of my shattered heart to..


Re: Giving Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 09:55:07 PM AEST
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This is really very heartfelt. Brought tears to my eyes.

Scott


Re: Giving Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:33:32 PM AEST
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Aw, Scott! Dont cry! :(
Thanks for the comment, and Im glad you liked it.




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