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Broken Heart
Contributed by
Ashley_07
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:05:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The wind blew through her dark brown hair,
As she pretended not to care.
Her heart was broken into two,
But there was nothing she could do.
She kept on living day by day,
Although she felt she'd lost her way.
Her love for him was always true,
But just like that they now were through.
Life must go on it will not end,
But now her heart she will defend.
Copyright ©
Ashley_07
... [
2005-02-26 14:05:21]
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Re: Broken Heart
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by Lozza on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:14:33 PM AEST
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| nice poem i think you could have put another couple of lines on the end to "finish" it off |
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Re: Broken Heart
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:39:02 PM AEST
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| Very good poem it relates to me when i was dumped in the past because the guy i was going out with was cheating on me,do thats what im doing this moment, defending my heart. great poem keep writing ...~~chrissy |
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Re: Broken Heart
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by BrokenAngel on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 08:11:21 PM AEST
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| Oh my god... Did you write this about me LoL This is like so how I felt when my boyfriend broke up with me. Great poem I loved it... |
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Re: Broken Heart
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by Rylo on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:51:36 PM AEST
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| This was really good, I like it a lot. |
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