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That would take forever to read.
A multitude of words,
That only the bible could exceed.

You’re suspended in my mind,
And I surrender to sleepless nights.
Your vision is wrapping the walls in the room,
Creating the Northern Lights.

And when the sensation behind my eyes,
Feels just like the urge to cry.
I’ll sit down and try to write poems,
Peering at words through teary eyes.

Though our visits are next to never,
And physical contact is very few.
You are the kind of guy that I would
Compare all the other ones to.

And when I asked God to help me let go,
He ignored my desperate plea.
But it was really his way of promising,
That he’d soon give you back to me.

You are the one who taught me,
That love can always find a way to survive.
You’re my proof that beautiful words,
Can jump off paper and come alive. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 48 [informant] => JacobsKK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 60 [ratings] => 12 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Living Poem

Contributed by JacobsKK on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:50:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You’re a living, breathing poem,
That would take forever to read.
A multitude of words,
That only the bible could exceed.

You’re suspended in my mind,
And I surrender to sleepless nights.
Your vision is wrapping the walls in the room,
Creating the Northern Lights.

And when the sensation behind my eyes,
Feels just like the urge to cry.
I’ll sit down and try to write poems,
Peering at words through teary eyes.

Though our visits are next to never,
And physical contact is very few.
You are the kind of guy that I would
Compare all the other ones to.

And when I asked God to help me let go,
He ignored my desperate plea.
But it was really his way of promising,
That he’d soon give you back to me.

You are the one who taught me,
That love can always find a way to survive.
You’re my proof that beautiful words,
Can jump off paper and come alive.

Copyright Â© JacobsKK ... [ 2005-02-26 13:50:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Living Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:54:14 PM AEST
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that was really emotional, very deep poem
pix xx

Re: My Living Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:55:28 PM AEST
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this was very impressive. i certainly did like this one.

Re: My Living Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:38:40 AM AEST
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Wow...the more I read your work, the more I like it..... I can see why it's a fav of yours...
Thank you for sharing it on YPDC...
Jenni

Re: My Living Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:55:34 AM AEST
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"You are the one who taught me,
That love can always find a way to survive.
You’re my proof that beautiful words,
Can jump off paper and come alive."

I agree with Jenni, I am really loving your words.

This is fantastic,
Great write,
Phil

Re: My Living Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by NoHoldingBack on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 11:04:58 AM AEST
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Are all of your poems this good?
My printer is out of ink! I wish I could show everyone the deep love that is among us here at your-poetry.com. For the love that you have for this boy would amaze everyone as it amazes me. GREAT write. I am definately hooked. And i have got about forty more of your poems to go. :-)

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