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Life fills, but Stammering...! ! !
Contributed by
naveen
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 06:26:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Fears Fearing, Abosom my heart
Talkin someone, tongues departs
Thoughts heaps abound
Stuttering, my mind forever bound
Loving a damsel
But, how can I tell
My accent's, an irony
Scents, life's agony
Walking a fire, no fears
Talkin entire's, set me in tears
Heart for spanish fries
But my stomach, still cries
S, in spanish fries
Swings Stuttering frights
Life's adventurous, a new day
Sturttering tremendous, tried to hay
Missin, when fluent sometimes
Stuttering in mind's affluent rhymes
Determination now a rife
Stuttering helped, a new life
Rocked, a serene heart
Tought, how face extremes apart.
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naveen
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2005-02-26 06:26:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Life fills, but Stammering...! ! !
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 08:53:29 AM AEST (User
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This struck me as being well written, although some of the rhymes are bizarre to read over again - its eccentricity endears itself to me in lieu of the magickal originality that comes along with it.
I commend you on sharing your valuable perspective here.
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