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Waiting Forever
Contributed by
Drop-of-Red
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:03:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There's a shadow of me on the wall
It's asking if I know who I am today
It doesn't look like me at all
It just seems to be pushing me away
I'm a bird who just can't seem to land
Losing his balance in the sky
And it's something that I cannot understand
But no one can answer my "why?"
I'd give my life to feel a meaning
I'd give up my time to fit in
I'd sit and wait forever
Just to feel loved again
Just to feel loved again
Just to feel loved again
I'd drop to my knees to feel loved again
And bleed to show that I care
An outcast on a deserted road
Is something no God can repair
I'd sit and wait forever
Just to feel loved again
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Drop-of-Red
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2005-02-26 05:03:55]
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Re: Waiting Forever
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:48:50 PM AEST
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| aww...this a very sad and beautiful poem...u'll be loved...in more ways than one |
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Re: Waiting Forever
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:07:29 PM AEST
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| you need not space every single line. your last bit was intriguing. what a life waiting...what a waste for something that might not even come. love yourself, so you dont waste your entire life for it. |
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Re: Waiting Forever
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by Concrete_Rose on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:58:37 AM AEST
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| I loved this poem, u seem very talented, this poem is realistic, so i hate it when ppl make comments like, " you should feel good about urself and blah blah blah, poems aren't suppose to always express happpiness they express whats real and how u really FEEl.....you should read my poem Mirror, Mirror and tell me what u think, its not to inspire n-e-one, but to let them know how it is in the real WORLD.... |
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Re: Waiting Forever
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by girltranscended on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 11:58:24 PM AEST
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| again a very emotional and powerful write, especially the end. Bravo :) |
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