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runaway
Contributed by
russ-dawg
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:28:49 AM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Hate the high school with their stupid rules
can't sand the people in this town, forget what they say nothings okay
got to get out before they catch me
its a new day but nothings really changed
I still hate every thing, every one around still act insane
got to get out before the make me crazy
got to get out, got to get out of this place.
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russ-dawg
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Re: runaway
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:32:58 AM AEST (User
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I agree but there is hardley any feeling put into this, I only know some feeling because I hate my town as well. I think you could definately improve. Really think about how much you hate the people, the school, how they act, etc. Block out everything, and just write.
Good luck.
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Re: runaway
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:45:43 AM AEST (User
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Sad but written well.
I use to feel the same many years ago but now that I'm much older my home town is the place I intend to stay.
Maybe u should examine deep down why u feel this way.
I've been out there in the big bad world and it ain't pretty.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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