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Array ( [sid] => 85741 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Killing Me Inside [time] => 2005-02-25 20:59:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Love growing for her
Should i leave her? I dont want to
To leave her means im already dead
Cutting again and completly depressed, i cannot take that
Only her brought me from that pain

Im dying slowly, pulled back down
Is our love wrong?
Between 2 girls like they say it is?
How can it be, when it saved me?
Without this love, i would be dead
As i am slowly dying again

An excrusiating pain in me
Far worse than described of death from my parents
Saying I WILL get aids just because im gay
What they say tears me apart inside
They say they only do this cause they care
They dont know what they're doing to me

Now I isoloate myself from the world again
Not trusting a soul, betrayed by family and friends
I dont know who to trust
So much pain killing me inside again

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Killing Me Inside

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:59:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Love growing for her
Should i leave her? I dont want to
To leave her means im already dead
Cutting again and completly depressed, i cannot take that
Only her brought me from that pain

Im dying slowly, pulled back down
Is our love wrong?
Between 2 girls like they say it is?
How can it be, when it saved me?
Without this love, i would be dead
As i am slowly dying again

An excrusiating pain in me
Far worse than described of death from my parents
Saying I WILL get aids just because im gay
What they say tears me apart inside
They say they only do this cause they care
They dont know what they're doing to me

Now I isoloate myself from the world again
Not trusting a soul, betrayed by family and friends
I dont know who to trust
So much pain killing me inside again

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2005-02-25 20:59:03]
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Re: Killing Me Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 09:28:31 PM AEST
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Awww this is so beautifully sad. Its well written, flows smoothly and is both insightful and expressive. I hope everything words out for you soon.

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