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Array ( [sid] => 85739 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Wish [time] => 2005-02-25 20:43:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wish for one day
To see a silver lining behind every cloud
To know the only way to go is up
When all you are is down

I wish for one hour
To be able to find peace
To find a time
When I feel the most at ease

I wish for one minute
I could focus on the blessings I have
And let go
Of all the heartache from my past

I wish for a moment
That I'd stop feeling blue
One moment of happiness
To help me get through [comments] => 5 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Stellar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

I Wish

Contributed by Stellar on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I wish for one day
To see a silver lining behind every cloud
To know the only way to go is up
When all you are is down

I wish for one hour
To be able to find peace
To find a time
When I feel the most at ease

I wish for one minute
I could focus on the blessings I have
And let go
Of all the heartache from my past

I wish for a moment
That I'd stop feeling blue
One moment of happiness
To help me get through

Copyright © Stellar ... [ 2005-02-25 20:43:21]
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Re: I Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by miss_leadin_lady on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:47:44 PM AEST
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Jus wanted you to know i enjoyed your poem. Keep up the good work!

Re: I Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 09:37:52 PM AEST
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A stunningly beautiful write. Heart-wrenchingly sad even. I hope you get what you wish for, I'll wish for you too...

Take Care
- Becca

Re: I Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:09:57 PM AEST
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This was a beautiful piece. I especially liked your first stanza, it really got me excited to see what you could come up with for the rest of the poem. Great Write, good luck.

--amanda--

Re: I Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:03:50 AM AEST
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dont we all...very nicely expressed...

Re: I Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:04:41 AM AEST
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a migle of sadness and beauty in this write, a great piece of writing
pix xx

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