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Array ( [sid] => 85721 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Strange Feelings [time] => 2005-02-25 18:39:33 [hometext] => My poems never rhyme. Just so you know. [bodytext] => With every day that passes
Emptier I feel
I close my eyes and
Try to deny myself what
I thought just happened

Strange feelings I'm having
Ones that I've never felt before
I feel tired, empty
I feel hated and loved
Never thought I'd say this but
I feel lied to

I told them about this
They now say I'm a disaster,
A lost cause
I say I want to talk
They say there's nothing to talk about
I say that I feel alone
They say I'm crazy

I'm changing and they don't
Want to accept that
You don't have to
Just know that,
As I keep this things inside me,
I'm dying every day, piece by piece

My mind's giving up
I feel like I'm done
Forget about me
Just know that it's your entire fault.
You have been killing me
Now, if I die,
Don't cry,
You got what you wanted.
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Strange Feelings

Contributed by sapphireshadow on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 06:39:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

With every day that passes
Emptier I feel
I close my eyes and
Try to deny myself what
I thought just happened

Strange feelings I'm having
Ones that I've never felt before
I feel tired, empty
I feel hated and loved
Never thought I'd say this but
I feel lied to

I told them about this
They now say I'm a disaster,
A lost cause
I say I want to talk
They say there's nothing to talk about
I say that I feel alone
They say I'm crazy

I'm changing and they don't
Want to accept that
You don't have to
Just know that,
As I keep this things inside me,
I'm dying every day, piece by piece

My mind's giving up
I feel like I'm done
Forget about me
Just know that it's your entire fault.
You have been killing me
Now, if I die,
Don't cry,
You got what you wanted.

Copyright © sapphireshadow ... [ 2005-02-25 18:39:33]
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Re: Strange Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Jezabel on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:23:50 PM AEST
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don't die. just get them back. sorry you feel sad luv

Re: Strange Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 07:15:46 PM AEST
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Don't die, and don't get them back. It doesn't help.

Something many people never understand: we can change again and again in life - sometimes it happens for the worse. Sometimes, if we know what we're about, we can change for the better. Then, it seems like the whole world changes with us. But in reality, we just see things we could not before.

I can't really say "how" to change for the better, because it's not really ourselves that do that changing. Follow the Light, if you can. It will change you. Light is selflessness - giving to others what we need so badly, but for them, not because we need it. It works miracles.

Blessings

Andrew

Re: Strange Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by axeman on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 07:29:43 PM AEST
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great poem. you wrote it well.

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