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Array ( [sid] => 85675 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Feeling Fragile [time] => 2005-02-25 07:24:12 [hometext] => Like a delicate cut glass flower.... [bodytext] => I am feeling a little fragile,
Have been feeling like this for awhile,
I used to be as sturdy as a rock,
Never faltered from any kind of shock.

But now I feel like a wilting flower,
Becoming weaker by the hour,
My love does all that he can,
He really is such a loving man.

I have no strength left anymore,
It waved goodbye as it closed the door,
I am a shadow of my former self,
Life has taken toll on my mental health.

Just one day I’d like to feel free of worry,
But it’s leaving my side in no kind of hurry,
I thought I’d always be as strong as an ox,
Now all I want is to hide in my secluded box.

I hold my hands up I am beaten,
All my suffering sanity has been eaten,
Eaten away by worry & pain,
It has broken my once iron frame.

I just want to curl up into a tight ball,
Don’t want to stop myself from my final fall,
I wish I didn’t feel so fragile,
My face has forgotten what it is to smile. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 48 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Feeling Fragile

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:24:12 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I am feeling a little fragile,
Have been feeling like this for awhile,
I used to be as sturdy as a rock,
Never faltered from any kind of shock.

But now I feel like a wilting flower,
Becoming weaker by the hour,
My love does all that he can,
He really is such a loving man.

I have no strength left anymore,
It waved goodbye as it closed the door,
I am a shadow of my former self,
Life has taken toll on my mental health.

Just one day I’d like to feel free of worry,
But it’s leaving my side in no kind of hurry,
I thought I’d always be as strong as an ox,
Now all I want is to hide in my secluded box.

I hold my hands up I am beaten,
All my suffering sanity has been eaten,
Eaten away by worry & pain,
It has broken my once iron frame.

I just want to curl up into a tight ball,
Don’t want to stop myself from my final fall,
I wish I didn’t feel so fragile,
My face has forgotten what it is to smile.




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2005-02-25 07:24:12]
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Re: Feeling Fragile (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:26:30 AM AEST
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Sad sad write. I like the intro, but expected it to tie a little tighter to the poem. Still, well structured and engaging. Good job Pixie. Warm wishes,

ARSENIC


Re: Feeling Fragile (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:03:51 AM AEST
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one need only 2 read your poetry and will remember not only how 2 smile but merely
feel again beautiful as usual pix . . .


Dorian Chambers


Re: Feeling Fragile (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:52:04 AM AEST
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Hope you are ok Pixie. Life can be so hard at times. One day at a time. Smiles will come inbetween the hurt and pain. Hang on in there.

Excellent poem

((HUGS)))


Love Sweetangelukxxxx


Re: Feeling Fragile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:45:33 PM AEST
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Awww this is so heart-wrenchingly sad. As a poem is written to perfect, it flows nicely and is both insightful and expressive. I hope everything works out for you, and that you're better soon.

Take Care
- Becca


Re: Feeling Fragile (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:10:00 PM AEST
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This is so sad. It made me feel hopeless too. Very well expressed and it flows like sand in between fingers.
Anne


Re: Feeling Fragile (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 02:01:52 PM AEST
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great write. i relate so much to it.
-Jen


Re: Feeling Fragile (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:56:04 PM AEST
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Boy!! I can surely relate to this... I have been feeling so fragile of late..and now trying to catch up on reading/commenting.... loved this..
Jenni




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