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Array ( [sid] => 85662 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Comparision [time] => 2005-02-24 23:36:38 [hometext] => this is a song that i wrote but i'm not sure if its good or not, so please leave feedback and be honest! It has to do with me and my older sister and my mom comparing us.... [bodytext] => COMPARISION

I'm not perfect
and i dont get straight A's
I'm not as pretty
and i'm not as good
I dont have a job
or a boyfriend you see
I'm sorry that i'm just me.

I'm my own person
please dont compare
I'm not like her
Even though i try
I'll always be mem
and i'm sorry
that i'm just me.

I try to be like her
I try really hard,
but everytime i try
I always screw it up
At night I cry myself to sleep
caz its feels like you dont love me
It feels like you want me to change
I'm sorry that i'm just me.

I'm my own person
please dont compare
I'm not like her
Even though i try
I'll always be mem
and i'm sorry
that i'm just me.

God made me special
Is what you always said,
If that is true, then why cant you see
That your deeply hurting me
comparing me to her.
Please just let me be me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 34 [informant] => drummer_chic12 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Comparision

Contributed by drummer_chic12 on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:36:38 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

COMPARISION

I'm not perfect
and i dont get straight A's
I'm not as pretty
and i'm not as good
I dont have a job
or a boyfriend you see
I'm sorry that i'm just me.

I'm my own person
please dont compare
I'm not like her
Even though i try
I'll always be mem
and i'm sorry
that i'm just me.

I try to be like her
I try really hard,
but everytime i try
I always screw it up
At night I cry myself to sleep
caz its feels like you dont love me
It feels like you want me to change
I'm sorry that i'm just me.

I'm my own person
please dont compare
I'm not like her
Even though i try
I'll always be mem
and i'm sorry
that i'm just me.

God made me special
Is what you always said,
If that is true, then why cant you see
That your deeply hurting me
comparing me to her.
Please just let me be me

Copyright © drummer_chic12 ... [ 2005-02-24 23:36:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Comparision (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:40:47 PM AEST
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dont appologize for being urself,its u,u r u,no one else,and when someone says that i should be more like someone else i tell them where to go and how to get there,if u know what i mean,anyways,these r really neat lyrics,if ur interested in reading some lyrics u should check out some of mine,most of my writes r lyrics,anyways great write,keep it up!!!remember u r who u r,no one else,we all r suppose to live our own destiny

savedbydeath

Re: Comparision (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:46:52 PM AEST
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I can definitely relate. As you said, you're just you, but you shouldn't be ashamed about that. I can't really say anything comforting without sounding like a hypocrite though. As a song its beautiful, deep and it flows nicely, I could just hear the words being sung in my mind. Very nicely done.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Comparision (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:43:14 AM AEST
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Wow this is great writing but I agree that u shouldn't apologize for being u.
god made us all unique.
I spent a life time trying to be different than the mode of normal. I've made lotssa mistakes that i would change but God does the changing from inside deep within. Actually I think we're born with it in us but this world of sin has a tendacy to catch us up in it's trap at times.
keep writing and by all means be who ur.
I was raised in a family of ten counting Mom-n-Dad but they always allowed us to be our own individual selves. they taught us about god and the power in his name but they never judged us.
keep up the unique u.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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