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Array ( [sid] => 85654 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Murder the Sun [time] => 2005-02-24 22:36:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Does this dagger show you nothing
Of what I plan to do
Reading your thoughts I see
You think I plan to harm you

But it's not you I plan to hurt
You have nothing to do with this
I will lodge my dagger in the sun
Murder the sun with bliss

I want to see stormclouds
Cover the Earth
Lightning to shatter
And thunder is heard

Rain on a never ending pour
And sad thoughts surround
Lying on a buried wreckage
To tore what I had found

The sun bleeds out a crimson glow
Drowning in deep doubt
That arises from long ago

Murder the sun
With my dagger of ice
Bleeding thoughts a ton
Flowing from thy deep slice [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 13 [informant] => dreamer_4_eternity [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Murder the Sun

Contributed by dreamer_4_eternity on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Does this dagger show you nothing
Of what I plan to do
Reading your thoughts I see
You think I plan to harm you

But it's not you I plan to hurt
You have nothing to do with this
I will lodge my dagger in the sun
Murder the sun with bliss

I want to see stormclouds
Cover the Earth
Lightning to shatter
And thunder is heard

Rain on a never ending pour
And sad thoughts surround
Lying on a buried wreckage
To tore what I had found

The sun bleeds out a crimson glow
Drowning in deep doubt
That arises from long ago

Murder the sun
With my dagger of ice
Bleeding thoughts a ton
Flowing from thy deep slice

Copyright © dreamer_4_eternity ... [ 2005-02-24 22:36:49]
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Re: Murder the Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:44:19 PM AEST
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wow, this is an amazing piece, dark and i loved reading it

Re: Murder the Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:29:08 PM AEST
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This is excellent! Its creative and quite powerful. I think my favourite line would have to be "The sun bleeds out a crimson glow" its just a gorgeous image.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Murder the Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 05:40:46 PM AEST
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wow...im speechless...beautiful...ahhh the beauty of it all....

summer

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