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In the rain

Piercing my heart
Tearing me apart

Barely listening
Because of pain

Decieving my eyes
With fake hellos and good byes

Cracking and crumbleing
Out of shame

Plaugeing me with your blackheart
I notice the game and I soon depart

Mentaly mumbleing
Defenately to blame

Stabbing me in the back with a knife
Towering over me....But I'm still alive

Walking away too soon
I grab the blade
Stab you in the heart
and then I start to carve
...
A name

I win and you die
Now scared, loser of this game
Wishing you
A fake goodbye
All the same
Plus nobody will know
Because I carved
...
John Doe
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John Doe

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:57:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Gloatfully glistening
In the rain

Piercing my heart
Tearing me apart

Barely listening
Because of pain

Decieving my eyes
With fake hellos and good byes

Cracking and crumbleing
Out of shame

Plaugeing me with your blackheart
I notice the game and I soon depart

Mentaly mumbleing
Defenately to blame

Stabbing me in the back with a knife
Towering over me....But I'm still alive

Walking away too soon
I grab the blade
Stab you in the heart
and then I start to carve
...
A name

I win and you die
Now scared, loser of this game
Wishing you
A fake goodbye
All the same
Plus nobody will know
Because I carved
...
John Doe




Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-24 18:57:50]
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Re: John Doe (User Rating: 1 )
by Moonglow on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:04:01 PM AEST
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That was beautiful and sad. I loved the way you grabbed my attention! I loved that, please feel free to PM me anytime!


Re: John Doe (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:35:45 PM AEST
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lol. even though this poem isnt funny, it made me laugh, because of its creativeness at the end. revenge is sweetly bitter... being nameless, interesting concept. and you made the concept worth reading with your talent.


Re: John Doe (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:25:41 AM AEST
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You know what, I can't pick any favorites with you Clark. They are all my favorite! This one is too. I really really liked this. It was very creative, cute with the ending, a wonderful write as usual. Nice job!

--amanda--




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