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Array ( [sid] => 85572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Seasons of loss [time] => 2005-02-24 11:43:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Summer.
Are the days we've spend together;
Filled with your kindness,
Your love,
Like the summer sun warming up my life.

Fall.
Is the day you left.
Like leaves falling from a tree,
You fell away from me.
Blown away by te wind, searching for a better place.

Winter.
Are the days I spend without you;
Cold and dark.
Snowflakes falling from the sky,
Are like loneliness and pain falling down on me.

Spring.
The snowflakes are gone,
The leaves are growing back on the tree.
The loneliness and pain are fading,
All that's left are memories.

Without you,
I know it'll never be summer again,
But spring's fine with me... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sonneke [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 32 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Seasons of loss

Contributed by sonneke on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:43:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Summer.
Are the days we've spend together;
Filled with your kindness,
Your love,
Like the summer sun warming up my life.

Fall.
Is the day you left.
Like leaves falling from a tree,
You fell away from me.
Blown away by te wind, searching for a better place.

Winter.
Are the days I spend without you;
Cold and dark.
Snowflakes falling from the sky,
Are like loneliness and pain falling down on me.

Spring.
The snowflakes are gone,
The leaves are growing back on the tree.
The loneliness and pain are fading,
All that's left are memories.

Without you,
I know it'll never be summer again,
But spring's fine with me...

Copyright Â© sonneke ... [ 2005-02-24 11:43:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Seasons of loss (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:53:48 AM AEST
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that was very well expressed and put together, it defenatly deserves 5/5 well done
pix xx

Re: Seasons of loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:14:48 PM AEST
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That was awesome. I forgot to breath. Now that the EMT’s have left, let me thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing yours. I loved this one.

ARSENIC

Re: Seasons of loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:59:31 AM AEST
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Lovely metaphors.
Simply expressed, and yet, they bring out the feelings so well.
I liked the way it ended too...bitter-sweet, sad and yet not devoid of hope.

Enjoyed reading this :)

Re: Seasons of loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Sonneke on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:00:32 PM AEST
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heey sjonnie....
gein idee euver weem ut hie noe eigenluk geit...neet euver mich in eeder geval anges woor ut pagina's lank geweis =D
mer ich help dich aan ein deil commentaars want eenmus mot toch get te zikkuh hubbe euver dien gedichtje.
mer ut is ein leuk en geinig iets....

much love your little sister....lindakuh
p.s: I LOVE IT :-)

Re: Seasons of loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Sonneke on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 06:36:35 AM AEST
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That was just my little sister trying to be funny..........

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