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I wish I were the avatar
An angel with dragon wings

I wish I had the strength to move the world
Just so I that we would not be apart

I love you with all that I am
With everything in me

I want you more than anything this world can give
If ever I needed something it is you

You are my heart my world my every dream come true
You are the source of my ever lasting joy

All my tears as of late have been
Because of you and how you make me feel

I want to make my life with you
And if I could not I do not want life

For it would be so not worth while with out you
It would not be worthless but I would not want it

Everything I need is in your eyes
And everything that has made me what I am now

Is because of you
You gave me something that I have wanted

For my whole life
It is the greatest treasure this world can give

And I do love you so very much
You are the world to me

You are everything I have ever wished for
All I could ever hope for is you

I hope you get this and all that I have sent you
I hope you love it all

As much as you love me
It is something I have wanted to send you

For the longest time
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Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:19:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I wish I were the avatar
An angel with dragon wings

I wish I had the strength to move the world
Just so I that we would not be apart

I love you with all that I am
With everything in me

I want you more than anything this world can give
If ever I needed something it is you

You are my heart my world my every dream come true
You are the source of my ever lasting joy

All my tears as of late have been
Because of you and how you make me feel

I want to make my life with you
And if I could not I do not want life

For it would be so not worth while with out you
It would not be worthless but I would not want it

Everything I need is in your eyes
And everything that has made me what I am now

Is because of you
You gave me something that I have wanted

For my whole life
It is the greatest treasure this world can give

And I do love you so very much
You are the world to me

You are everything I have ever wished for
All I could ever hope for is you

I hope you get this and all that I have sent you
I hope you love it all

As much as you love me
It is something I have wanted to send you

For the longest time

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-02-23 23:19:41]
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by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 12:08:08 AM AEST
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what a beautiful poem.well done.

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by Gothchyk on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:21:51 PM AEST
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I love it John, very beautiful write

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by Essentially9 on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:28:03 PM AEST
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you were write. this is very good indeedy. just have to make everything poetic eh?

Re: The Avatar (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:04:16 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem. How you must miss her when she is away, says it all in your words.

Love Sweetangelukxxxxx

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