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Array ( [sid] => 85470 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angel... [time] => 2005-02-23 15:33:23 [hometext] => I'm not an angel when I die... [bodytext] => Crystalline skies, smiling sun,
She waits for me in her sea of blue with open arms…
I wish to fly to her,
Spread my wings and receive her warm embrace…

Yet, I am forever bound to these chains…
Wings stripped from me so long ago, by some ungrateful father,
I remember now, as he smiles that devil’s grin…

I yearn to recline on a marshmallow cloud,
Bask in splendid light, abandon this horrid morbidity,
And begin to live… a free existence…

Yet, here I am,
Encompassed in my own crimson essence,
Dying…ever so slowly…of this dagger in my heart…

The hilt starts a dance of repetition,
Imitating my ragged breaths in perfect unison…
Death hovering over me now, mocking with a bony finger,
And I wonder if he will take me this time…

Deprived of innocence, fallen from grace,
Results of sinful desire, unmasked face…
The truth has been revealed,
There’s more to me than meets the eye,
I can honestly say… that I’m not an angel when I die…
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Angel...

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:33:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Crystalline skies, smiling sun,
She waits for me in her sea of blue with open arms…
I wish to fly to her,
Spread my wings and receive her warm embrace…

Yet, I am forever bound to these chains…
Wings stripped from me so long ago, by some ungrateful father,
I remember now, as he smiles that devil’s grin…

I yearn to recline on a marshmallow cloud,
Bask in splendid light, abandon this horrid morbidity,
And begin to live… a free existence…

Yet, here I am,
Encompassed in my own crimson essence,
Dying…ever so slowly…of this dagger in my heart…

The hilt starts a dance of repetition,
Imitating my ragged breaths in perfect unison…
Death hovering over me now, mocking with a bony finger,
And I wonder if he will take me this time…

Deprived of innocence, fallen from grace,
Results of sinful desire, unmasked face…
The truth has been revealed,
There’s more to me than meets the eye,
I can honestly say… that I’m not an angel when I die…




Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2005-02-23 15:33:23]
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Re: Angel... (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:40:18 PM AEST
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woah....I really like this. It's so graphic, and sends so many pictures into the mind. A truly wonderful poem...

~Marissa


Re: Angel... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:54:46 PM AEST
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The sins of the Father are just that. they are non transferable. His actions may have affected who you have become ... but not what you will become ...

l'ange, fleur, a répandu vos ailes et vole... devenu que vous êtes né en ce monde, pas ce que ce monde a fait à vous

Beautiful in a rather somber way, Stephy.

Nazmythian ~


Re: Angel... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 01:40:42 AM AEST
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(((((((( 4 FleurdeSang ))))))) wish u well

sweetie . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Angel... (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:20:43 PM AEST
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I find this piece beautiful and kinda sad. .
I really liked it alot.


Re: Angel... (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:22:13 PM AEST
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I yearn to recline on a marshmallow cloud,
Bask in splendid light, abandon this horrid morbidity,
And begin to live… a free existence…

And you will be free from the chains that bind your heart..Do not let it imprison your thoughts.

You have so much love inside of you
I can see the beauty that shines.

Much love sent your way

Love Sweetangelukxxxx




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