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When suddenly before me appeared a playful little sprite

Her skin was soft and shimmered, as if kissed by morning's dew
Irradescent as the starlight, with a slightly silver hue

She danced beneath the moonbeams, shining bright as any star
And I sat and gazed in wonder, captivated from afar

She darted 'round the tree leaves, laughing lightly as she went
And layed herself upon the grass when her energy was spent

THen as I watched she stretched her wings, and smiled in pure delight
And with a laugh she darted quick, and flew off into the night
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Moon Sprite

Contributed by LadyWynter on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:03:13 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I sat beside my window, staring out into the night
When suddenly before me appeared a playful little sprite

Her skin was soft and shimmered, as if kissed by morning's dew
Irradescent as the starlight, with a slightly silver hue

She danced beneath the moonbeams, shining bright as any star
And I sat and gazed in wonder, captivated from afar

She darted 'round the tree leaves, laughing lightly as she went
And layed herself upon the grass when her energy was spent

THen as I watched she stretched her wings, and smiled in pure delight
And with a laugh she darted quick, and flew off into the night

Copyright © LadyWynter ... [ 2005-02-23 10:03:13]
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Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:29:39 AM AEST
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What a neat poem. I wish I had your imagination.

Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:09:52 AM AEST
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heavenly beautifull.
A masterpeice of beauty.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:20:58 PM AEST
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Oooooooo very nice!!!
This peice has wonderful imagery!
Form an rhyme are very well done as well.
Overall a great job on this!!!!

Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:25:49 PM AEST
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What a refreshing read !! Light and happy. It reminds me of Bernard's Fairy writes ... if you have not yet seen his work ... you should investigate. He writes in a similar style about all manner of fairies. He would enjoy this as well. you have a magnifique entry here.

Nazzy ~

Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 01:38:44 PM AEST
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I was there in your window, watching that sprite. Laughing with it, enjoying the moment. Thank you for such a delightful scene. Wonderful poem.

Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 04:30:21 PM AEST
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AWWW!! This is so cute! I love this! Refreshing, happy, and beautiful images all wrapped in a pretty moonlit package! LOVE IT! lol. You have quite the imagination, cheri LadyWynter. Glad you have shared it with us. All my love. Forever,

Your friend,

Stephy.

Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:24:18 AM AEST
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I am in awe..... your imagination & talent is brilliant.... Awesome poem!!!

Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:49:02 AM AEST
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I like this best of all yours. It simply glows with the wonder of a child's eye view. Lovely.
Stitch

Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:22:48 PM AEST
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This has wonderful imagery, I could really see it.
Like a fairy playground. lol.

Great write once again.
I looove your poems.

*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Moon Sprite (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 02:04:51 PM AEST
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enchantingly sweet and beautiful,

hugs n' love nessa

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