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My salvation,
My doom,
In one package of temptation
And a world of gloom.

Six little cuts
My secret love
My dreaded hurt,
This is no dove,
It’s a time to be alert.

Six little cuts
My inside smile,
My outside tears
It’s not worthwhile,
It brings no true cheers.

Six little cuts
Shining on my arm
A bright, beautiful red
This is the reason for the harm,
Though it may leave me dead.
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Six Little Cuts

Contributed by Live2Die on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:58:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Six little cuts
My salvation,
My doom,
In one package of temptation
And a world of gloom.

Six little cuts
My secret love
My dreaded hurt,
This is no dove,
It’s a time to be alert.

Six little cuts
My inside smile,
My outside tears
It’s not worthwhile,
It brings no true cheers.

Six little cuts
Shining on my arm
A bright, beautiful red
This is the reason for the harm,
Though it may leave me dead.

Copyright Â© Live2Die ... [ 2005-02-22 22:58:39]
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Re: Six Little Cuts (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyWynter on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:08:07 PM AEST
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I'm a cutter, so I really related to this piece. I know many people don't understand why we do the things we do, hang in there sweetie. I know it's hard, but times will get better.
*Hugs*
LadyWynter

Re: Six Little Cuts (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:45:10 AM AEST
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sad and dark write, expressed well,
pix xx

Re: Six Little Cuts (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:13:50 PM AEST
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Excellent! depressing, but excellently expressed!good job on this one marissa

Re: Six Little Cuts (User Rating: 1 )
by iluvpencils on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:23:33 AM AEST
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I love this. I can really relate. There's something about cutting in a row, yknow all lined up, that is described perfectly in the phrase "six little cuts." What can I say? I loved it. Thanks for your comment.

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