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Array ( [sid] => 85366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => :BEYOND: [time] => 2005-02-22 22:56:28 [hometext] => let me know what you think about this one...i dont know why i just like it in all caps [bodytext] => MEDITATION IN A LAND
FAR BEYOND REACH
SITTING IN A FIELD NEVERENDING
SKY AS CLEAR AS RAINDROPS
OVERLOOKING OCEANS - FEROCIOUSLY
ROLLING FOREVER
HE SITS, DRESSED IN WHITE
PURE AND CALM
BLOCKING OUT THE BRUIT
IGNORING THE SCENERY
ONLY HIM AND HIS GOD
HE RISES, ARMS OUTSPREAD
LOOKING UP TO THE SKY
SMILING HE FLYS
HE KNOWS
BEYOND LAY SO MUCH MORE
ROLLING OCEAN, WAVING GRASSES,
CLOUDLESS SKIES
LOWERING HIS HEAD, KNEELING
HE IS CONTENT, WANTING NOTHING
HE FEELS SAFE
HE KNOWS
THOSE THINGS ARE BEYOND HIM
TO FAR TO COMPREHEND
HE FEARS NOTHING
FOR HE DOESNT NEED
TO
BEYOND HIM
HE'S WATCHING
PROTECTING
ALL. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 62 [informant] => kewter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

:BEYOND:

Contributed by kewter on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:56:28 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

MEDITATION IN A LAND
FAR BEYOND REACH
SITTING IN A FIELD NEVERENDING
SKY AS CLEAR AS RAINDROPS
OVERLOOKING OCEANS - FEROCIOUSLY
ROLLING FOREVER
HE SITS, DRESSED IN WHITE
PURE AND CALM
BLOCKING OUT THE BRUIT
IGNORING THE SCENERY
ONLY HIM AND HIS GOD
HE RISES, ARMS OUTSPREAD
LOOKING UP TO THE SKY
SMILING HE FLYS
HE KNOWS
BEYOND LAY SO MUCH MORE
ROLLING OCEAN, WAVING GRASSES,
CLOUDLESS SKIES
LOWERING HIS HEAD, KNEELING
HE IS CONTENT, WANTING NOTHING
HE FEELS SAFE
HE KNOWS
THOSE THINGS ARE BEYOND HIM
TO FAR TO COMPREHEND
HE FEARS NOTHING
FOR HE DOESNT NEED
TO
BEYOND HIM
HE'S WATCHING
PROTECTING
ALL.

Copyright © kewter ... [ 2005-02-22 22:56:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: :BEYOND: (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:03:35 PM AEST
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I like it, but the caps make it seem angry, not serene and calm as it sounds it should be....

Re: :BEYOND: (User Rating: 1 )
by crystalfire on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:00:52 PM AEST
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I love this poem, it is very calming and serene, makes people almost feel protected just as this man does. I do have to agree, however, the caps do make it seem almost angry. Good job, though!

Re: :BEYOND: (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:21:11 PM AEST
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i loved this poem, it is so relaxing and calm and i felt so safe as i imagined this. it was wonderful, but i too agree with the capital letters. it seems like you shouting or mad anyways nice write

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