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Array ( [sid] => 85363 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost in the fog [time] => 2005-02-22 22:37:14 [hometext] => Feeling sad [bodytext] => With a heavy heart
and a tear finding its way down my cheek
I turn my back
and hope everything is ok
I don't know what to do
as an awkwardness
surrounds me
engulfing me in a heavy fog
making it hard to breath
Guilt starts to block my veins
As I'm getting suffocated
people are getting hurt
people I care about
I lash out
In a desperate measure
to feel something
something of the old me
and I only hope that this isnt me
That I'm not out to hurt
hurt the only people
that know who i can be
I don't know who I am
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MnMnMsrcool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Lost in the fog

Contributed by MnMnMsrcool on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:37:14 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

With a heavy heart
and a tear finding its way down my cheek
I turn my back
and hope everything is ok
I don't know what to do
as an awkwardness
surrounds me
engulfing me in a heavy fog
making it hard to breath
Guilt starts to block my veins
As I'm getting suffocated
people are getting hurt
people I care about
I lash out
In a desperate measure
to feel something
something of the old me
and I only hope that this isnt me
That I'm not out to hurt
hurt the only people
that know who i can be
I don't know who I am

Copyright © MnMnMsrcool ... [ 2005-02-22 22:37:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost in the fog (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:55:51 PM AEST
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i liked much of this. i would especially like to see more of this type of writing...
"an awkwardness
surrounds me
engulfing me in a heavy fog
making it hard to breath
Guilt starts to block my veins
As I'm getting suffocated" i like vagueness in poems. the entire thing doesnt need to be vague, but even a bit, leaves something to the imagination and gives depth to what otherwise would be a shallow poem.

Re: Lost in the fog (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:46:36 AM AEST
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you expressed yourself well, I hope that the fog clears for you soon,
pix xx

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