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[aid] => mick
[title] => Come In My Love
[time] => 2005-02-22 21:58:54
[hometext] => this is a song I wrote with the same thing in mind as the rest of my poems... It's one of the first songs I've written, so please post responses or pm me with what you thought and rate it. I don't no how to format this, so this is the best I can do.
[bodytext] => Sorry for the formatting... when 3 spaces appear in the chorus it is a pause in the song. I hear your name I feel the pain I feel the shame Of love I see your face Long for your embrace I'm in this daze Called love My love chorus: To me You are The Earth The sun The moon And the stars Their light Your face So bright And the door's ajar For you You are the love of my life I love you So much Can't stand this waiting Can't stand this waiting Can't stand this waiting Come in my love I see your smile I love your style I'd walk a thousand miles For you, love Do you love me Could we ever be Happily In love My love chorus (following is a random rant supposed to be said musically after a guitar part which I am still writing) I don't have the courage To ask you out I don't know what you'd say Can't stand this doubt Please ask me Ask me (repeated multiple times) chorus (another rant follows, this one sung, the melody repeats) Come into my home At least it's a start Come into my life Let me in your heart You've been on my mind You're that kind of girl Now throw me a line Let me into your world Let me come in my love Come in my love (repeated indefinately) [comments] => 3 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 34 [informant] => high_on_duct_tape [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
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