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Array ( [sid] => 85339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the pain within you [time] => 2005-02-22 19:31:16 [hometext] => only a short poem, comments appreaciated. [bodytext] => ever get to the stage where you just dont care
ever feel like you cant carry on no more
craving for someone to help you survive
waiting for everything to crash down as you fall to the floor

people around you stare at your face
staring into your eyes trying to work you out
confused by the hatred you hold inside
they can tell you are going to fail without a doubt

world crashing down around your sorry soul
memories haunting you while you sleep
so cry into your pillow tonight as you cut
flood this room with blood and pain from within so deep

you will never be freed from this world
stuck within this tragedy they call life
start to feel the pressure building up
your only way out is the knife

+ nail-to-the-head +
20.02.05 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 61 [informant] => nail-to-the-head [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

the pain within you

Contributed by nail-to-the-head on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:31:16 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

ever get to the stage where you just dont care
ever feel like you cant carry on no more
craving for someone to help you survive
waiting for everything to crash down as you fall to the floor

people around you stare at your face
staring into your eyes trying to work you out
confused by the hatred you hold inside
they can tell you are going to fail without a doubt

world crashing down around your sorry soul
memories haunting you while you sleep
so cry into your pillow tonight as you cut
flood this room with blood and pain from within so deep

you will never be freed from this world
stuck within this tragedy they call life
start to feel the pressure building up
your only way out is the knife

+ nail-to-the-head +
20.02.05

Copyright © nail-to-the-head ... [ 2005-02-22 19:31:16]
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Re: the pain within you (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:27:39 PM AEST
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Brilliant poem....great ending....Good stucture...all around awesome Job....

Clark

Re: the pain within you (User Rating: 1 )
by hopefulheavyheart on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:44:09 PM AEST
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I agree, very well written. I can relate to this one. Last night infact. Nothing enough to do permanent damage, just a temporary escape.

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