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people know me as a smily rose
But what they can't really see
Is your eternal flame buried in me

O Painful Pain,I can't stand you anymore
I'm not as tough as i was before

Fed from my joy each day you grow
Slaves for you weak people bow

Infesting my body from head to toe
Freely in my blood you swim and flow

Slipping smoothly,sliding slow
obsessing victims until they blow

Ruining my life I won't longer you allow
stealing my hapiness,Never,NO!!

Drug,cure,anti-pain..wish i know
what else you want of me?!tell me,show!

Darkness,bitterness because of you i saw
I had enough,PLZ Let me be!Let me Go!

I want to lay once again on my pillow
Happy as a child,clean from sorrow
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O PAINFUL PAIN!

Contributed by gina on Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

If I ever laugh,it's only because
people know me as a smily rose
But what they can't really see
Is your eternal flame buried in me

O Painful Pain,I can't stand you anymore
I'm not as tough as i was before

Fed from my joy each day you grow
Slaves for you weak people bow

Infesting my body from head to toe
Freely in my blood you swim and flow

Slipping smoothly,sliding slow
obsessing victims until they blow

Ruining my life I won't longer you allow
stealing my hapiness,Never,NO!!

Drug,cure,anti-pain..wish i know
what else you want of me?!tell me,show!

Darkness,bitterness because of you i saw
I had enough,PLZ Let me be!Let me Go!

I want to lay once again on my pillow
Happy as a child,clean from sorrow

Copyright © gina ... [ 2002-12-13 23:40:00]
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Re: O PAINFUL PAIN! (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 11:47:56 PM AEST
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This was a very sad & heartfelt poem,Nicely done! Christina

Re: O PAINFUL PAIN! (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 02:28:00 AM AEST
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Hey, this was very angry just the way I like them. My favourite lines were the last 2 in the first stanza. I've been where you've described in your poem more times than I can count. This was a very good poem u didn't hold back anything way to go!

- Bobo (Joel)

Re: O PAINFUL PAIN! (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 06:15:07 PM AEST
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very sad, but written well.
sorry for your pain, I wish you well in the healing of your heart.
AMber Rose :)

Re: O PAINFUL PAIN! (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 08:16:41 AM AEST
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Oh whatever the pain.... remember Gina, misery loves company

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