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The only light in the world shows your silhouette
You're so far away but I'll keep going
Your outline is the only thing the light is showing
Its all too confusing as the light shifts side to side
I get closer and see you lit by a bunch of fireflies
Flying from behind you and on your face their light spreads
Up your neck and past your eyes they spin a circle around your head
I saw you standing under a beautiful star
I'll inch closer hoping that I will not scare the fireflies off
Caressed your face and the ice on your lips
The bright light from your halo melts away the coldness
An embrace that turned a broken heart to one mended
The fireflies disappear into the night and they took us with them [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 2 [informant] => heartquake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
HeartQuake XVI (FireFly Halo)

Contributed by heartquake on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:47:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Its so cold here and the ground is so wet
The only light in the world shows your silhouette
You're so far away but I'll keep going
Your outline is the only thing the light is showing
Its all too confusing as the light shifts side to side
I get closer and see you lit by a bunch of fireflies
Flying from behind you and on your face their light spreads
Up your neck and past your eyes they spin a circle around your head
I saw you standing under a beautiful star
I'll inch closer hoping that I will not scare the fireflies off
Caressed your face and the ice on your lips
The bright light from your halo melts away the coldness
An embrace that turned a broken heart to one mended
The fireflies disappear into the night and they took us with them




Copyright © heartquake ... [ 2005-02-22 13:47:14]
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Re: HeartQuake XVI (FireFly Halo) (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:01:34 PM AEST
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This is beautiful.....a couple of the stanzas in the middle need some work...but other then that another great write....


Clark


Re: HeartQuake XVI (FireFly Halo) (User Rating: 1 )
by kewter on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:03:54 PM AEST
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wow this is awesome
so beautiful




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