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Array ( [sid] => 85290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Midnight Memory [time] => 2005-02-22 12:56:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => With my memories wrapped around me
like a long warm coat;
I walked outside for a late
midnight smoke.
The lonely moon was full and bright;
in my darkness; it was a
solitary light.

Smoke and mirror memories,
circled the dark sky.
In the moons presence;
I began to cry.

Suddenly chilled by love's
lost afterglow,
I started back inside,
missing you so.

With a distinct, but fleeting feeling,
that I wasn't alone,
I looked behind me,
into the unknown.

The moon in the sky;
my heavenly host,
shone his luminous light,
on your omnipotent
ghost.

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A Midnight Memory

Contributed by bethie on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:56:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

With my memories wrapped around me
like a long warm coat;
I walked outside for a late
midnight smoke.
The lonely moon was full and bright;
in my darkness; it was a
solitary light.

Smoke and mirror memories,
circled the dark sky.
In the moons presence;
I began to cry.

Suddenly chilled by love's
lost afterglow,
I started back inside,
missing you so.

With a distinct, but fleeting feeling,
that I wasn't alone,
I looked behind me,
into the unknown.

The moon in the sky;
my heavenly host,
shone his luminous light,
on your omnipotent
ghost.

Copyright © bethie ... [ 2005-02-22 12:56:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Midnight Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:58:38 PM AEST
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very moving, can relate to this alot. good write
pix xx

Re: A Midnight Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by VirtuosoB13 on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:29:15 PM AEST
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Wow that was great! You are very talented. Check out my poem, "Secret Place" and tell me what you think. Take it easy!

Re: A Midnight Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:52:43 PM AEST
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Nice write

Whisper

Re: A Midnight Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:01:48 AM AEST
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Wow! Just wow! I felt EVERY word of this. Loved the ending. Nice write.
Stitch

Re: A Midnight Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:22:27 PM AEST
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a masterpiece of beauty of expression, you are a pleasure to read:) hugs n' love nessa

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