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Array ( [sid] => 8526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Sex Sex Sex [time] => 2002-12-13 20:30:00 [hometext] => now that i got your attention you can read my poem. . .*smile* [bodytext] => Shut Down and Pushed Away

I can't believe I got shut down
you trampled my heart to the floor
all I wanted was to be with you
but another girl is what you were looking for
I sit in grief
and think about what I have done
to push you away from me
to make you turn and run
my heart is broken
it might have even cracked
all I feel is resentment
it might go away if I would just relax
but I can't
because all I wanted was you
I tried to call to get you to call me
I kind of came on too strong, but what else could I do
I tried to get your attention
I tried to get you to look my way
I just didn't work
because you didn't stay
now you're chasing her
l'm left here out in the cold
because it was her that you wanted
It is you that she will hold
there is no one for me
no one to care
there is no one to want me
no one to be there
I'll fix my heart
make it stronger than before
then I will go on
and fight my raging war
when I have succeeded
and won my own fight
I will find a man for me
and make everything right
we will be together
as lovers and friends
in a story that started "Once upon a time"
and ended with "The End"

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Sex Sex Sex

Contributed by unpredictable on Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Shut Down and Pushed Away

I can't believe I got shut down
you trampled my heart to the floor
all I wanted was to be with you
but another girl is what you were looking for
I sit in grief
and think about what I have done
to push you away from me
to make you turn and run
my heart is broken
it might have even cracked
all I feel is resentment
it might go away if I would just relax
but I can't
because all I wanted was you
I tried to call to get you to call me
I kind of came on too strong, but what else could I do
I tried to get your attention
I tried to get you to look my way
I just didn't work
because you didn't stay
now you're chasing her
l'm left here out in the cold
because it was her that you wanted
It is you that she will hold
there is no one for me
no one to care
there is no one to want me
no one to be there
I'll fix my heart
make it stronger than before
then I will go on
and fight my raging war
when I have succeeded
and won my own fight
I will find a man for me
and make everything right
we will be together
as lovers and friends
in a story that started "Once upon a time"
and ended with "The End"





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Re: Sex Sex Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 11:56:16 PM AEST
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Good write,I enjoyed reading thisWheres the SEX part? LoL! Christina


Re: Sex Sex Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 09:28:43 AM AEST
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hehe u surely got my attention,this is a naughty sex poem :P
i wonder what your next poem's Title will be :)
mmm i liked it ,but hey dont u lose hope , as u said,ull find ur man ,we've all been there


Re: Sex Sex Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 07:54:27 PM AEST
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I like your poem it was very interesting and very well written.


Re: Sex Sex Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:18:11 AM AEST
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Girl I know what your going though. I mean so am I


Re: Sex Sex Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by etherealgurl on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 06:36:01 PM AEST
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Great write! I think everyone's been there and you expressed it well




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