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Happy
Contributed by
hopelessromantic
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:13:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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You took my hand,
looked at me,
and asked me silently
will you be with me.
I looked back
and my eyes said yes,
so now we are together at last.
I thank you for the memories,
all the fun time we share.
I am happy we are together,
I hope it last forever.
When you took my hand,
and asked me silently
I knew we would be happy.
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hopelessromantic
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2005-02-21 23:13:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Happy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:21:35 AM AEST (User
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Reminds me of how I got together with my first boyfriend. :-) Good write. |
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Re: Happy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:21:13 AM AEST (User
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Its nice that you don't feel bad about it ending.
Keep writing. |
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