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Array ( [sid] => 85185 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crimson Desire [time] => 2005-02-21 16:29:25 [hometext] => Psychotic and ment to be read that way too.... [bodytext] => Vermillion
Such a beautiful color
Vixen
I wish to murder
My desire
A feeling that
Tires
Making me weak
So
I wish for you dead
And with your death
Will also come in hand
The color red
...
Your life expires
As I fulfill
My
Crimson
Desire
...
And as I hold your head in hand
I ask you to laugh now and forever
...
If you can! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 59 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Crimson Desire

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Vermillion
Such a beautiful color
Vixen
I wish to murder
My desire
A feeling that
Tires
Making me weak
So
I wish for you dead
And with your death
Will also come in hand
The color red
...
Your life expires
As I fulfill
My
Crimson
Desire
...
And as I hold your head in hand
I ask you to laugh now and forever
...
If you can!

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-21 16:29:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Crimson Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:35:15 PM AEST
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Call me demented..but I love it

Re: Crimson Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:36:42 PM AEST
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lol, that comment was funny. i know i am demented and i love it more! this reminded me of slipknot with the vermillion part, cant go wrong with that.

"i can see you, but you cant see me
i could touch you, and you wouldnt even feel me
wait a second and youll settle down?
im really waiting till you let your guard down
youre relaxed, youre sublime, youre amazing" thats my favorite tid bit by them...

Re: Crimson Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:38:34 AM AEST
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creepy.. i love it!

Re: Crimson Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:28:33 AM AEST
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this is really dark and creepy...but a great write.

i love it.

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